I agree with the statement that universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. There are three reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, some people could disagree with me, even though, in my opinion, this is a point that has been dealt to be significantly important. I consider that sports and social activities are classes and we can learn very much with these. For example, in last year, when I was playing volleyball with my team, I think that I was the better player’s team and this went my friends were sad with me. I consider that without the sports, I do not learn about character and spirit of the group.
In the second place, In my mind, if social activities are not as important activity as classes, are not much require like pre-require in important universities, like Havard and Cambridge, besides classes and credits. Moreover, we have a claim example that learns when a person do whatever wrong, can be punished to the justice like social activities, and It shows like a good point to explain to people about citizens.
Third, I consider that the sport helps many students to study in the other country and are a wood to the study. I was calling to study in the USA between the volleyball and I consider that this gonna help me very much.
Finally, I understand that classes and libraries are sometimes the base to teach a person, but we cannot forget how the sports and social activities help the man in the teaching a person, begin child, teen or adult. In my personal opinion, sports and social activities have received equal financial as classes and libraries. If not important, was not very much ability like are in our society, like projects and plans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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I agree with the statement that universi...
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... character and spirit of the group. In the second place, In my mind, if soci...
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...rson, begin child, teen or adult. In my personal opinion, sports and social activities have rece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61128783199 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1342145943 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264472877005 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11178800403 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163246459823 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181287597143 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176326268648 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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