TPO 02: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every relationship, no matter what kind it is, should have specific characteristics. Nevertheless, there is some controversy about whether always telling the truth should be one of them. As far as I'm concerned, there is no harm in hiding some truth.
First of all, since truth can hurt people's feelings, it is more beneficial if avoided sometimes. We, human begins, are such simple-minded creatures. Most of the time, we ask questions to be praised. We don't want authenticity. For instance, whenever my wife asks me whether she is overweight or not, I always tell her what she wants to hear. This way, It could strengthen our family bond with an indeed nominal price.
Secondly, being honest all the time causes a great deal of stress. If we tell unpleasant truth, we may spend days thinking about the consequences of our deed. It might also jeopardize the relationship. As an example, last month, when my colleague asked me if she was looking good. I simply told him the truth. Though she didn't give me any negative feedback, I could see on her face that she was feeling blue. I spend days thinking about how I ruined his mood. It gave me tremendous stress. Had I told her an insignificant lie, she would feel a lot better.
Moreover, telling little lies can often motivate people we care about to excel. Humans are very competitive and want to be the best at whatever task they've been assigned. Whether it is taking a test at university or trying to gain weight, they would achieve impressive results if they are praised enough. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, when my brother was struggling to compete in a marathon, he asked me for my opinion. Had I told him what I really thought, he would have given up completely. But, I said to him that I see in him the potential to be in the top 10 percent. He didn't succeed as I expected. However, this game gave him the opportunity to accept that there are thousands of things that he can't and shouldn't do. Instead, he understood that his focus should be on more mental activities such as teaching.
In summary, I feel that being not very ethical, from time to time, can be helpful for every human being. It is because lies can motivate people to perform better and because being honest can hurt people's emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65356265356 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68970068868 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570024570025 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3870862659 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1333333333 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23333333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947016456224 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245270596885 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273452439882 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582597960152 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288955769 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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