TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Friend is one of the best person among the others on this planet whether it can be your old friend or your new friend. Some people says that making a new friends is not
good but others deny.I strongly go with the point that we have to make new friends as time pass.You get a new experience when you will make new friends. In addition,
Thus you can increase your contact level and position. Whenevr you feel sadness and upset in a new place then only these new friends can help you to recover from these.
Since our childhood, we all heard one phrase "Old is gold" and this phrase may or may not be fitted with the peoples' life especially in friendship. Some people says
friends are like angle on this earth but some peoples don't think so. In my opinion, friend relashionship is one of the strongest relationship on this planet. Making a
new friends is also a your skill and it shows how you interect with the people. Only, new friends can help when you are not at your home or territory. Furthermore, you
can learn something from your new friends.

Indeed, friendship relationship is the purest relationship on this planet. We all love to make friends whether we are at home or not. We can not live without our
neighbours they are also friends, our collegies, our classmates and etc. You have to interact with other people whenever you are not at your home and this shows how
you are talking to the other person. And if you find that this persons is like my personality then definetly you will not leave him/her without exchanging your numbers.
In this example - I have been to central university for my master degree. I found a new receptionist when i reached to the office. I did not know him and afer that
i started to talking to him. And later after finishing the talk, I realise he is the same kind of person as I am. His thinking exactly match with my thinking upto 80%.
So, We exchange each others number and became a very good friends from last some days.

Furthermore, if you are in other country then you have to talk other persons for your need. You will interact to other persons and it build your confidence and improve
your taliking skills. It is also beneficient to gain the knowledge from other persons. Example - I have been to Japan last year. I met there several people rather than
guide and finally I found that every stranger have a new ineteresting story of his/her life. If you started to listen these story then time will go out without seeming.
Atleast 8 out of 10 pesons are in my contact now from Japan where I have been for the project work. This exeperience give me a lot knowledge about peoples and it also
builded the confidence. So, making a new friends is good for your you as well as for your knowledge and skills.

Lastly, Whenever you are not at your home. You lives in a hostel and you are pursuing your study then you interact with the other persons in any conference or any where
in the campuse. If you discuss with the people on your topic then it will boost your confidnce and in future you can discuss your topic infront of
scientist or philosopher etc. Example - One of my friends has been to the USA for his P.hd. and he always discuss his topic with the other aspirants. One aspirant give
him a suggestion that you can do this things in another way and he gives a little bit idea about that. Furthermore, my friend followed the same tactic and he did best
on his Phd topic. At the end, his thesis paper published in worlds' best publication nature. And he also won the several prizes for it. So, making new friends is a
good idea to increase your knowledge and skills.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...end. Some people says that making a new friends is not good but others deny.I strongl...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le says that making a new friends is not good but others deny.I strongly go with ...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...w friends is not good but others deny.I strongly go with the point that we have...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...e have to make new friends as time pass.You get a new experience when you will make...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you will make new friends. In addition, Thus you can increase your contact level...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...hrase may or may not be fitted with the peoples life especially in friendship. Some peo...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pecially in friendship. Some people says friends are like angle on this earth but...
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Line 6, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ke angle on this earth but some peoples dont think so. In my opinion, friend relashi...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...ationship on this planet. Making a new friends is also a your skill and it shows how y...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
...s planet. Making a new friends is also a your skill and it shows how you interect wit...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your home or territory. Furthermore, you can learn something from your new friend...
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Line 10, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...home or not. We can not live without our neighbours they are also friends, our co...
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Line 11, column 65, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... friends, our collegies, our classmates and etc. You have to interact with other people ...
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Line 12, column 59, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the other person. And if you find that this persons is like my personality then def...
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Line 13, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...degree. I found a new receptionist when i reached to the office. I did not know h...
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Line 13, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...office. I did not know him and afer that i started to talking to him. And later a...
^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ice. I did not know him and afer that i started to talking to him. And later af...
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Line 15, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...ch others number and became a very good friends from last some days. Furthermore, if...
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Line 17, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'builds'?
Suggestion: builds
...u will interact to other persons and it build your confidence and improve your tali...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and it build your confidence and improve your taliking skills. It is also benefic...
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Line 18, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I met there several people rather than guide and finally I found that every str...
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Line 19, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...new ineteresting story of his/her life. If you started to listen these story then ...
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Line 19, column 119, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this story' or 'these stories'?
Suggestion: this story; these stories
... his/her life. If you started to listen these story then time will go out without seeming. ...
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Line 20, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lot knowledge about peoples and it also builded the confidence. So, making a new...
^^^
Line 21, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
...uilded the confidence. So, making a new friends is good for your you as well as for you...
^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 48, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'You' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
... Whenever you are not at your home. You lives in a hostel and you are pursuing your s...
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Line 23, column 160, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
... the other persons in any conference or any where in the campuse. If you discuss with t...
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Line 23, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r persons in any conference or any where in the campuse. If you discuss with the ...
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Line 24, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re you can discuss your topic infront of scientist or philosopher etc. Example - ...
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Line 25, column 107, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
... to the USA for his P.hd. and he always discuss his topic with the other aspirants. One...
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Line 26, column 34, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... give him a suggestion that you can do this things in another way and he gives a li...
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Line 26, column 76, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...is things in another way and he gives a little bit idea about that. Furthermore, my friend...
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Line 27, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
... the end, his thesis paper published in worlds best publication nature. And he also won the...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to increase your knowledge and skills.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, then, thus, well, as for, in addition, kind of, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 119.0 43.0788530466 276% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3010.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 666.0 407.700716846 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51951951952 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08005667302 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3807206375 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406906906907 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.6003584229 194% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3748144871 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.175 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134467298508 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414754877736 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398948547825 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514312340456 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415348249332 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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