Cars are metal machines that we use as transportation and are proof of our rapidly growing technology. However, they started shoving their negative impacts on our planet such as air pollution-most extreme. I agree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years for following reasons: public transportation will advance, cars that are being use now will expire after twenty years and humans know the disadvantages of cars.
Firstly, as technology is growing at rapid rate, most of our daily uses are getting their advanced versions. For example, in sixteenth century, people used to transport by carriages which is why London was not able to extend beyond Thames river. For the following reason, Thames tunnel was introduced with faster, more powerful and more comfortable accommodation for British residents. After this invention, people stopped using wooden carriages except for shows, tourists and agriculture. Nowadays transportation became so advanced that it can carry hundreds of people once, such as high speed rails, buses , underground metros and even machines that use energy instead of gas are now innovated.
Furthermore, in twenty years world population will reach its peak and will start decreasing. Which is one of the factors why humans will use less cars. In a slowly decreasing population half will consist of aging and new people who are not able to use cars. In addition, cars that are used now will be out of use in next twenty years. Combining these factors with the cause i have said in the second paragraph there will be few cars in the future, because with only half of the population and very advanced transportation the automobile industry will decrease making new cars.
Lastly, humans have faced one major problem which destroys nature, brings habitats near extinction, deforestation, desertification and many serious illnesses. Humanity is still working to solve this problem now, but we know that the major reason for this is excess use of cars. People suffered this problems so much that someday they will come to a realization and abandon the use of cars.
In conclusion, there will be lesser cars in the future due to many reasons i have not yet mentioned.
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le once, such as high speed rails, buses , underground metros and even machines th...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... one of the factors why humans will use less cars. In a slowly decreasing population...
^^^^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... is excess use of cars. People suffered this problems so much that someday they will...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, except for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11813186813 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76210857146 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7003610784 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230467341497 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801319379138 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084973257136 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13999166875 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829774688935 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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