there are several ways to have communicate with other people . some of them are logical and have strong effect on people's minds . if we know how to relation with others ,we have better feeling in life .
there are several ways to have better relation among family and friends . one of the most important thing is being honest with the others . all scientists and psychologists say , people can trust to people if they are having good feelings about them because, it causes nice situation and the others choose you as a good person for whole life . for example ; I had a classmate during high school period . she wanted to be in all groups and she was really passion to take part in different social groups so she tried to absorb her friends idea and she said a lot of lies about her herself and her family , after few months some students found out her lies . so, they cut their relationship with her and she got alone again and she didn't have friends at all in that school .then, she got out from that school .
most people believe that good relationship make with trustworthy and honesty . one to the psychologists work on this and says , when someone try to tell the truth to others , that person feels better about himself or herself and it causes more relaxed and these people have more self confidence , they are happier than other people . on the other hand, people think that they are reliable . so, we can count on them to tell our secrets to them and sometimes we can talk about our problems . for instance, I have an uncle who is very reliable in family and as I remembered one of my cousins had a problem in his life , he preferred to talk with my uncle and after few months his life secured by his suggestions and It was a really good memory.
finally, i prefer to be honest and tell the truth in my life . because different experiences express this fact and people who tell the truth are more successful in their life and they don't have guilty conscious never .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51404494382 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29836330786 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483146067416 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4831933643 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.5376344086 885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727865852859 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343606246139 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340609174299 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050745469017 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141998966057 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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