Since, from the past friends are the very essential creature in every person's life in needs and in joys. Different people have distinct perception in admitting the importance between old friends and new ones. Some people might love making new friends as different people have different uniqueness whereas some might find influential with the old friends. I agree with the latter one with the facts that the old friends share a good bond of understanding with the loyal, trustworthy and honest relationship.
First of all, friends are an integral part of any person's life and add happiness in life. It also has a saying " Friends in need is a friend indeed". It is easier to share the feelings and secrets with old friends than to new friends. For example, When I walk with my old friends we tend to criticize the surrounding people with humorous which adds joy and fun in daily life. But its not comfortable to share such silly things with the new friends as we don't know their taste of humor.
Secondly, old friends are always there when we need them. They are like our family members with whom we do not feel shame in asking help or demanding certain things. For example, when I want to visit any new places than i just had to make a call and they are ready without questioning why I want to go there. They are so easy to communicate with. Moreover, such camaraderie relation is not common among the new friends.
Finally, aged friends are more than a teacher in giving an advice. As they are friends for so long, there is a trustworthy relation among them. For an instance, I had made a mistake in my project. When they realize about it they instantly correct me and saves my grade from degrading. When I do good things they applaud me and it gives me motivation to do more innovative things which is obviously lacking in new pals.
In conclusion, I share a healthy bond with old friends as they are supportive, genuine and factual people.
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations. 73
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass window 73
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jay contained a copper cylin 73
- We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.To what extent do you agree ? 84
It this score rate alike with
It this score rate alike with the real test?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...re the very essential creature in every persons life in needs and in joys. Different pe...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ll, friends are an integral part of any persons life and add happiness in life. It also...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...silly things with the new friends as we dont know their taste of humor. Secondly,...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...iends are more than a teacher in giving an advice. As they are friends for so long, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64655172414 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53905125567 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5291792088 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.85 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212408308152 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722426683614 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491284472071 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123777603417 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377326247756 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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