With rapid develop of the whole society, it is become more and more important to modern people to have coherent social connections with others. It is obviously that we always meet new people and make new friends, at the same time, we need to keep in touch with those old friends. From my perspective, making new friends is definitely more important than keeping old friends.
To begin with, new friends help us widen our horizontal and we always can learn new knowledge and hear special experience from new friends. Those new friends will bring something new to our lives and maybe give us some totally expand aspects to consider events, which will play a significant role in our personal development.
In addition, imaging that when we confront difficulties, who will us turn to find help? The answer is friends. Thus, continuously making new friends enables us have more choices when difficulties come. For instance, as a student major in computer science, I rarely have opportunities to make friends with doctors. When I have to handle some healthy issues, it will e much easier if I have a doctor friend to consult with before going to hospital.
I have to point out that those successful persons share a same characteristic, having lots of friends. It cannot be denied that friends are so important if a person want to be successful in whatever field. As the richest man in China, Jackie Ma is a perfect example. He has so many friends in various field that we never imaged. We can infer that those persons helped him achieve much in those field, like music and finance market.
Admittedly, old friends always are treasures in every people's lives, they are reliable, understand your every trifle emotion and always hold your back. But new friends, widen our horizontal, give us assistants and our road to success is paved by them. If a person always stick to old friends, he or she will be restricts to the inherent circle. Since everyone is a part of the society, making new friends is an social need and inevitably.
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 70
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
With the develop of the whole society, it is become more...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cts to consider events, which will play an significant role in our personal develo...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this success' or 'those successes'?
Suggestion: this success; those successes
... to hospital. I have to point out that those success person share a same characteristic, hav...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...that we never imaged. We can infer that those person helped him achieve more in those field,...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e in the society, making new friends is an social need and inevitably.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214285714286 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107142857143 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0841836734694 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.094387755102 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0178571428571 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61034675936 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00255102040816 0.00188951952338 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.0637755102041 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015306122449 0.0139019557991 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2018.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76571428571 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342857142857 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245714285714 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148571428571 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0885714285714 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61034675936 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534285714286 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.6241448757 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4444444444 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8770471114 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 44.0158730159 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.05785123967 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420622974243 0.300154397459 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113228885958 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080731043536 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539246789854 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132580947153 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168697479727 0.114077575197 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867855833514 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252674034863 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0288434157029 0.067059652881 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272159436685 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105089160542 0.0618886996521 170% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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