In a life, meanwhile, a friend is one, whom you can say a person to share all the perspective of life, which you are going and gone through of it. I am basically a very social human soul so, I make lots of in my regular schedule because as a working woman, I am contrasting with many people and just look up their normal behavior as well. hence, I find many people around me and discover the fact that the old friends are much better than new friends. I think my experience is just speaking here because as a professional, obviously I always connect with new environment. so the old mates are buddies that shares all the the moments of personal life, concern with you in your activities and enjoys every level of lives.
Aged friends are basically a group of people, whom your are living your major part since many time ago. Thus, you are able to partake even your sensitive matters, they never let you down and show always a positively sign to any memories that you are sharing by them.
Moreover, Friend always show a huge amount of their level of interest in your life. This is because the care, admire and adore yourself as they are taking their own. Although, they show personal beliefs to correct, maintain or manage yourself.
In the last, but not the least, he or she a mate that you explore your especial memories and make each one of them very beautiful so that you can taste every bit of life. furthermore, it is not easy this to manage with your new friends because you do not spent much time as compare to you ancient mate.
Hence, I always have an particular place for my old buddy, which I can not give to any other one. Nevertheless, I also excite myself for the recent one too. I think friends are souls who connects with you very badly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... look up their normal behavior as well. hence, I find many people around me and disco...
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Line 1, column 573, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... I always connect with new environment. so the old mates are buddies that shares a...
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Line 1, column 618, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e old mates are buddies that shares all the the moments of personal life, concern with ...
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Line 1, column 618, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e old mates are buddies that shares all the the moments of personal life, concern with ...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'show'.
Suggestion: always show
...ve matters, they never let you down and show always a positively sign to any memories that ...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('positively') instead an adjective, or a noun ('sign') instead of another adjective.
...they never let you down and show always a positively sign to any memories that you are sharing by...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... correct, maintain or manage yourself. In the last, but not the least, he or sh...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...o that you can taste every bit of life. furthermore, it is not easy this to manage with you...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...u ancient mate. Hence, I always have an particular place for my old buddy, whic...
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...souls who connects with you very badly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43692307692 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3318205296 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.786876675 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216888443442 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760559460705 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056290161744 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122360541492 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569469584571 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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