Thorough history mankind always needed to live in a society and in order to survive having some friends is a necessary key.
Some people think that it's better to usually keep your old friends and do not try to find new friends, although others believe finding new friends is more necessary for life. on my own perspective i highly support the first idea and in next paragraphs will clarify my reasons.
The most important reason for advising keep old friends is trust. it takes time to people trust each other and when they do not have this feature in their friendship, how they can ask for help or rely on their frineds. its difficult to tell a person your secrect when you do not trust him. As illustrated in one experiment for people it takes at least 2-3 years to trust their friends, so if man tries to find a ;ot of new friend at the end it will take a lot of time and affort to find the most trustable guys.
the other reason which deserves some words here is that its always take time to be familiar with people's attributes. the more you spend your time with your friends, the more you will be familiar with their characteristics. for example being late is always a bad behaviour but it sometimes will happen for most of us. if we know that our friends is use to be late, we won't be angry a lot, otherwise if this situation happens with an unknown person, probably we will have a lot of argument later.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first one which cross the mind at first glance, time is another key factor. Nowadays people are so busy because of different reasons such as work, home life and etc. so they do not have enough time to search for new friends every day. they prefer to have a few old close friends and spend their free times with them.
to make a long story short, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, he/she will understand that endure keeping old firends is the option. Consequently, it highly recommended that try to behaive with your old friends as well as you can, because friends are like diamond in our life.
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. 76
- TPO 10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, well, at least, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48952879581 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34210696523 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510471204188 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0300450277 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238975170539 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850316053088 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761360532061 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124607366021 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588192035156 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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