Everything has been changed now as compare to our grandparent’s time. I agree with the statement that life get easier and more comfortable today than it was when our grandparents were children. I hope, it will change continuously in the future as well. In addition, as time going on technology is changing constantly. Because of it every day’s things changes a lot.
Indeed, life gets simpler and more comfortable now than retrospective. It was, in retrospect, difficult to go from one place to another place but, now, it is not difficult to travel around the world. It took, in past, several days to move from one territory to another or just few miles but, recently, you can travel thousands of miles within hour. Example: train is the humans great invention. Thousands of people can board in it in one time and they can go their destination within hour. But, in retrospect, it took a lots of time. There was no such thing in the past that several people can travel simultaneously. So, it shows that, today, life is simpler and more comfortable.
Furthermore, people, in retrospect, used to send letters to their relatives but, now, people can make call to their relatives, friends, and teachers instantly. Communication system changed a lot nowadays than when our grandparents were child. In retrospect, it took months to reply a single letter but, now, you can connect to anybody in the entire world within a second. Example: when my grandfather was doing his master in the college. He lived in the hostel and, in every hostel, there was only one desktop to check student's email. Therefore, students ought to make a long queue to check their mail but, now, everyone has laptop or mobile phone and it is very easy to check their mail and any other important stuff.
In addition, technology has been changed dramatically from retrospect. Technology made the peoples life very simpler and more comfortable. In every field, technology play its vital role to making peoples life easier and more effortless. Example: It has been changed the way of growing the crops in field. So, now, farmers life get more effortless. Peasants used to ploy their fields with the help of bullocks cultivator and it takes several days to ploy one acre field but, now, electronic cultivator can ploy one acre field within minutes. And, peasants can grow their crops on time thus they can produce more grains from their fields. Thus, technology makes peasants life more simple.
In inference, I strongly believe that life has been changed a lots and the technology makes people's life not only simple but also more comfortable than our grandparents
were children.
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...lt to travel around the world. It took, in past, several days to move from one territor...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ithin hour. But, in retrospect, it took a lots of time. There was no such thing in the...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ly from retrospect. Technology made the peoples life very simpler and more comfortable....
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o more comfortable than our grandparents were children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95749440716 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75236709507 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467561521253 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2802271946 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1428571429 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9642857143 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16463418145 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560549629259 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915733581066 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11102338175 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497410117021 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.