TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
over the last few decades, with the increasing number of vehicles sales, cars have become a very controversial issue in the modern world. personally, I believe that shortly most people will be many more vehicles in use than there are nowadays. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the developing world is increasingly urbanizing, which means that in the future more people will need to drive to their workplace. In the past, most people were not dependent on these vehicles, as they engaged in agriculture work. most of them were working, which in fields near their homes. In contrast, today most people live in apartments in the urban area and use public transportation or their automobiles for the commute. my friend fred is a compelling example of this. All of his parent's members worked on rice farms in western Turkey. Once in a while, they traveled short distances using pack animals, but generally stayed close to their native village. fred, on the other hand, moved to a city last year to work in an iron factory and drives almost thirty kilometers from his home to the factory every day with co-workers. I can see no indication that this trend will reduce in the future. As a result, it seems likely that even more people will experience this.
Furthermore, incomes are rising all over the world, which means that in the future automobiles will be affordable for even more people. In the past, there were a few personal cars which were owned by some very rich families in the cities. Now, however, consumers in developing countries like China and India purchase millions of cars every year. Drawing from my own experience, when I first moved to Istanbul, I didn't have a car. I had to walk 45 minutes to and from work every day. however, I would dream of owning an automobile of my own, but it would make financial sense for me to walking or take public transportation. I have even wanted that someday hope to own two automobiles, just like many people in the west. Consequently, I strongly believe that this trend will eventually increase in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that in the future there will be more vehicles on the road than there are today. this is because the world is rapidly urbanizing, and because rising incomes will open up even more markets for automobile companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76399026764 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60828385443 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.564143478 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1304347826 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128664863502 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383808890664 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379687244386 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090158898083 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261823528072 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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