Times goes to fast, so much so we can’t feel it, which imposes people to invest it in good things rather than waste it in unuseful things. Especially nowadays because there is too much distraction that people can’t handle with it. And will explain why In the following essay.
First of all, new technologies is became wilde spread and for example phone mobile which connected to internet, now almost every body is addicted to social media we can see that people spend hours surfing in network, looking for news, friends, scandals. And that depend on the person. And as a compelling example myself with the social media, I had an important exam and every time I open my books to study I found my self with my phone drowning in this vast world. And that was a huge mistake that costs a lot for me.
Secondly, human tends always to satisfy his pleasures, and found himself all the time fighting to choose between what he must to do and what he is doing in reality, and I give myself again as an example, when I go out to pay my bills or whatever it is important I found my self in stores doing shopping or some days I plane with my friends to workout and we finish in coffee shop instead gossiping.
In other hand companies plays on this side and invest a lot off money on commercials and marketing because they know that poeple is weak to things bringing enjoyment and pleasure.
To sum up, I strongly believe that people today spend too much time en enjoying himself than doing beneficial things because there is more attraction today than yesterday, and because human loves fun by nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...y. First of all, new technologies is became wilde spread and for example phone mobi...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h my phone drowning in this vast world. And that was a huge mistake that costs a lo...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'tends'.
Suggestion: always tends
... costs a lot for me. Secondly, human tends always to satisfy his pleasures, and found him...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...time fighting to choose between what he must to do and what he is doing in reality, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38454213308 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.208441832 48.9658058833 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.3 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262474156274 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834707088528 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705545856381 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133073778908 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706368736864 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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