Taking broad knowledge of many academic subjects or one specific subject is the issue of many youngsters before going to college. In general, knowledge defines our way of thinking. In other words, how much expansive our viewpoint can be, is related to knowledge we have gained formerly. On the other hand, there is no need that all of our knowledge be around academical procedures. Our lifetime is limited and this short time should not be wasted on aimless tasks. I surely recommend just focusing on one subject. It seems less in number but in another hand more detailed in quality.
First, when someone studies more than one subject he had less time to explore all aspects of each ones and as a result, his knowledge does not reach to the top at none of the subjects. Second, societies are in demand of professional experts in particular subjects and extra sophomoric knowledge in most of the cases do not fulfill employment's requirements. With contrary point of view, someone may argues that multitasking is an integral part of jobs at the present century and to address this demand, he may considers that this ability is obtaining just by expanding the subjects of academical knowledge. It's completely true that multitasking is a necessary skill every job candidate should have to take his/her dream job, but it is obvious that this skill doesn't provide just by academical knowledge and it is mostly related to personal experiments and nonacademical knowledge. Finally yet importantly, multi subject uptake takes a lot of time and hinder the individuals to develop other aspects of their life.
In summary, I think it is absolutely better to focus deeply on one major subject to reach to its utmost and besides gaining other social abilities you can guarantee to get your dream job in the future.
- TPO 12 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- １-Which one do you prefer? Why?– a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or– another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
... just focusing on one subject. It seems less in number but in another hand more detailed in qu...
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Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... job, but it is obvious that this skill doesnt provide just by academical knowledge an...
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Line 2, column 881, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...xperiments and nonacademical knowledge. Finally yet importantly, multi subject uptake t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, i think, in general, in particular, in summary, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73677686853 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3710369416 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247133459298 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849378182834 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832515082808 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157317004012 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346782035183 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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