When we talk about knowledge, a large basket of ideas with multiple spectrum start walking all over the mind. supposed, that basket is a personality, multiple spectrum are positive ideas of people regarding the same individual's personality, it indicates that, without knowledge, life would be example of dark room which people are not able to see even big things. I strongly agree, being specialized in one target subject is much better, rather than to have wide range of knowledge in many subjects. Because of several reasons, which i will touch them in the following passage. First, we could be great discoverer. Secondly, we would be able to carry the life easy.
Stated roughly, pay attention to main subjects will change the prospect of life for people. However, everyone is well to bring positive changes in their life, either if changes is through knowledge or activities. In spite of the facts, many scientists focused only on one aspect of the subject. For example, being a biologist, my focusing was only about, to discover a fact which help the students in the exams as well me, that why starches giving color to water?. After a lot of thrived, by performed an experiment in the biology lab, i become succeed. At that time, every student made me surprise, by calling me "intelligent discoverer" till now.
In addition, selection of subjects is more important for people, in order to make the life easier. despite, many people wants to achieved their goals only by knowledge, others by doing multitasks. So, most of them prefer to cross each wish through knowledge, in this way, they are selecting only specific subject which would helped them properly. If i pick up an experience, last year my friend were favored to carry many subjects at same time, he became unsuccessful which led him to more difficult moments .Touche the points, chose one subject as a tasks and work on it hardly, could face you to many happy moments.
Taking everything into consideration, specialization on target subjects is the way of succeed. Because, it will protect the time for us to carry other works which are necessary in the life. Moreover, specialist of specific subject could be good server to society, such as he would be able to play major role as a teacher in the university or school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91002570694 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75973558923 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596401028278 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6917861525 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186284364743 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536744343303 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590001135739 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110825616439 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359074473837 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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