Globalization makes international travel possible and more and more people are choosing to travel abroad instead of traveling in homeland. Of couse, traveling in one's own country has numerous benefits. However, I believe that there are more benefits for people to travel abroad than travel domestically. There are two reasons for my opinion in the following paragarph.
First of all, visiting a foreign country provides an opportunity to understand a different lifestyle, which cannot be obtained in orginal country. During the traveling in a foreign, travelers start to compare the foreign lifestyle with their native one and they tend to take the better one. Take myself for example, after I lived in Australia for one year, I find out the lifestyle of Australia is better than it in China, therefore, I decided to live in Australia. The benefit of acknowledging a new lifestyle cannot be achieved by traveling in one's own country.
Moreover, people who travel abroad learn culture of the country and consider about the drawbacks and shortcomings of their own culture. Without question, adversity exists in the tradition and costom of every country, and the culture in a foreign country is substantially different from it in travel's motherland. Vistors who have the chance to visit a foreign country also can perceive the scum of their own culture by comparison and contrive to rectify it. After I worked in Australia for eight months, I realized that work is not the most important part of life, enjoying life is. Australian
In conclusion, I concur with the idea that people gain more benefits from international travel than domestic travel. The reasons are the chance of experiencing different lifestyle and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21146953405 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88472800845 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523297491039 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6029693786 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320449097735 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122558679493 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837357107412 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217409004254 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668926599449 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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