There is no doubt that traveling has a tremendous effect on people life. It is not far-fetched to presume that many people travel for different reasons. Some people advocate that traveling in the same country is more beneficial than traveling to foreign countries. AS far as I'm concerned, I think that traveling worldwide has enormous advantages. That is because traveling to other countries will help you to broden your horizon. Moreover, it help you to acquire a new language. The rationale behind my statement will be further elaborated in the ensuing essay.
First and foremost, Traveling to foreign countries help people to gain a thorough knowledge and help them to broaden their horizon. when people visit other countries they will know their traditions, norms, and their culture. That in turn will help people to be more opened to other and to be unbiased. For instance, The example from my own life might shade some light to this issue. In the past, I had a wrong idea about American people. I thought that they are rude and unfriendly. I gained this idea from from wrong notions that have been entrenched in us since childhood. When I came here, I found that I have completely a wrong perspective about people. Moreover, I started not judging people according to their nationalities or religions. This travel was so influential to me. Therefore, it's definitely better for people to travel to foreign countries just like what I did.
The second crucial aspect which should be considered is that people will have the opportunity to learn new language or enhance their language when traveling to different countries. That is so vital for them in a long run. For instance, I read an article on-line about this matter. People in Egypt university faculty of medicine found that the travel to a foreign country has a fundamental role n their life. Since, their traveling to England enhanced their language in English and made them able to gain the edge against their rivals. Some of them flourish and achieve a sense of accomplishment due to this opportunity. Therefore, this example shows clearly how the traveling to foreign countries is so vital to help people gain a new language.
To sum up, I'm firmly convinced that it's better for people to travel to foreign countries. Because adapt this attitude will
people increase their comprehension and develop their thinking. IN addition, it help people to gain a new language or be influent in a foreign language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98554216867 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73315689461 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46265060241 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7284643353 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8928571429 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8214285714 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53571428571 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29612934236 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843840537124 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670668627108 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175622453071 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603789235488 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.