In today's world, people are realizing expedition as a part of recreational activity and while doing so, some want to move in a group led by a tour guide where as some want to move alone, by themselves, without help of any usher. In the given prompt, it is said that best method of travel is in a group ushered by tour guide. However, I, in my opinion, disagree with the prompt because it will always not be a beneficial opinion due to various reason.
At first, it depend on the preference of the person. For example, In Nepal lot of foreigner visit come here every years. We see them alone rambling on street along with the map or other accessories rather than tour guide. When we inquire them why they aren't guided by guide then they reply that we prefer to move alone. In additional, for any frugal expedition, the best method to save money is to traipse alone since it saves the money that will be expend on guide. For instance, While I was going to trekking in Nepal, I meet an German citizen who had also came for trekking. when we traveled together, I asked him why he was not with any guide or groups. Then he replied that having a tour guide he have to pay 100$ per day, which was hard to him to manage and second, while traveling with friends, there can be a conflict between their desire.
Second, while having a tour guide we cannot expect from them that they will always usher us an exhaustive location. For instance, when we were India, tour conducted by our college, we were guided by a guide but since that was a time for rush of tourist so he had only ushered us only in limited places. So we cannot view various important places. This places was visited by me when I got a chance to go to India next time and alone.
However, it doesn't mean that traveling in group with a guide in not always helpful. Guide can help us when we cannot communicate with local people and group can take care of each other when we are in need. but it will not be always helpful.
Finally, I believe that nature of expedition- with group or without group, with guide or without guide- mostly depends on behavior of person, situation and other various factor. Thus, I believe that best way of travel depends mostly on circumstances rather than number of person and presence of usher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
In todays world, people are realizing expedition as a part of recreational ac...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... to move in a group led by a tour guide where as some want to move alone, by themselves,...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
... due to various reason. At first, it depend on the preference of the person. For ex...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ur guide. When we inquire them why they arent guided by guide then they reply that we...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going to trek'?
Suggestion: going to trek
...end on guide. For instance, While I was going to trekking in Nepal, I meet an German citizen who ...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... was going to trekking in Nepal, I meet an German citizen who had also came for tr...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
..., I meet an German citizen who had also came for trekking. when we traveled together...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...citizen who had also came for trekking. when we traveled together, I asked him why h...
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Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... he replied that having a tour guide he have to pay 100$ per day, which was hard to ...
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Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100'.
Suggestion: $100
...that having a tour guide he have to pay 100$ per day, which was hard to him to manag...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...w various important places. This places was visited by me when I got a chance to go...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...dia next time and alone. However, it doesnt mean that traveling in group with a gui...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...care of each other when we are in need. but it will not be always helpful. Final...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, second, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4336492891 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30005449245 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2004731053 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.55 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133346182243 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472106235757 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488303050456 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895546186616 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492865258861 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.