There are number of ways people like travel some like to travels in groups while others likes to travel alone. In my perceptive I would like prefer to travels in group. My propensity for this for following reasons.
To begin with, traveling in groups is more safer than travel alone, travels in groups we can seek helps from partners in difficult situation, for instance, if someone going for lone journey and he driving alone its very difficult for him to drive lone hours without rest if he traveling with group he can ask other to drive for him to avoid the accident, also if we travel in bus or train we also need someone to take care our stuff or getting food so traveling wit the tour guide makes all these thing ease and gives us peace of mind, for these reason I consider to travel in group rather than alone.
secondly, traveling with the tour guide one can learn more about the place or country ,for example tour guide are expert people who have lot of knowledge about the places where you intended to go. while you alone don,t know the place history unless someone guide you and i believe that having touring guide is best ways to know about the country or place, also tour guide usually speak other international languages which is another edge to have a tour guide to get some knowledge from others natives people for these reasons i prefer to travel with guide rather than alone.
To sum it up, although traveling alone or with tour guide is depends upon many circumstances.I personally like to travel with tour guide because its offers more safety as well as,more knowledge about the place where you going.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62413793103 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19129452615 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.707454242 48.9658058833 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.571428571 100.406767564 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4285714286 20.6045352989 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 5.45110844103 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1882646 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100863088626 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300856442185 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125108541639 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00548933494354 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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