Friends is precious thinks in any one life. Teacher is most respected person in any one life. All those some people think that teachers have more influence on students life but some people also think that friends have a great influence in student life. As far as I am concerned, i think both side have their own reasons, let us get down to the arguments first before we take a side.
First of all, We live in a social world many thinks that influence our daily life. In my view friends are those people who have study together, who are at same age and better understanding between them. Friend are always very important in our life because we can share many think that we don't able share with our parents. So there influence are very effective in our life. For example, when i was at class ten i am not doing well in my mathematics and chemistry, but my friend samil was good in that subject he help me to understand math and chemistry. In the final exam i have got 90 percent mark in both subject. So i personally think that friends are most influential person any life.
Secondly, teacher are our mentor and harbinger of our life. They gives us right education and direction do well in educational life. But teacher are not all ways understand student condition what is their problem? what they need ?. Sometime teacher take care lots of student so they can't focused a single student. Age gap is one of the main problem between student and teacher. So teacher are not all ways have perfect influence in personal life.
Finally, Friends are expend most of their time with each other, they play together , gossiping together and fun together. For that reasons they know each other very well. They have expand almost 10- 12 hour to each other . So their good and bad habit all ways have a great influence. For example, my elder brother have a very close friend he has a bad habit smoking, it affected this group of friend. Now all of them are chain smoker. So friends have great influence in student life.
In sum, above discussion it clear that student are pass long time together than teacher. So they friends have great influence any one life than a teacher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58354755784 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31013596703 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491002570694 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8040576712 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.037037037 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4074074074 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169696370044 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567365410868 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621578200889 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126347747619 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066598952352 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.