The reading and lecture both discussed about conditions of venus and cost debit about possibility to present of human in venous. While the reading claim that human present on venus are impossible because the condition of venus are very extreme and inhospitable and provides three supporting reasons. However, the lecture refutes this supporting reasons and professor say that presence of human is possible on venus.
Firstly, the reading claims atmospheric pressure are 90 times higher than earth that means if spacecraft landed it will crushed this huge amount of pressers. However, the lecture refutes this point by saying that if spacecraft station are build above 50 kilometer above the surface of venus it will be possible that spacecraft are not crushed. The professor also states that in that height presser are at the level of earth.
In addition, the reading make argument that shortage of water and oxygen in venus is make inhospitable condition, because venus atmosphere are full of carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid. so if we want stay venus we need to supply oxygen and water from the earth. However, the lecture refutes this point by saying that chemical composition can make oxygen and water from venus atmospheric chemicals.
Finally, the reading argues this point sunlight are reaches only 40 percent and 60 percent are reflected by cloud, so spacecraft are not able to get electricity power from the solar power cell and they are not able to power up the machines and equipment. The lecture refutes this point by say that if spacecraft are stay 50 km above the ground surface lots of sunlight are available in that height, so this is not a major problem.
- TPO 45 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 60
- TPO 41-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TOEFL Sample essay : integrated essay from TPO 12 70
- TPO 49 - Integrated writing 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cost debit about possibility to present of human in venous. While the reading cl...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'crush'
Suggestion: crush
...that means if spacecraft landed it will crushed this huge amount of pressers. However, ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...f spacecraft station are build above 50 kilometer above the surface of venus it will be p...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...on dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid. so if we want stay venus we need to supply...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eight, so this is not a major problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04642857143 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51779128587 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9401294444 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353414181186 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142800655931 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052312903996 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207932963629 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454530529216 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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