Everyone has their own preferred on student and who is the most influence their student life, all of them have strengths and weaknesses. In my opinion i agree with that student are more influence by their teacher that their friends. I feel this way there are two main reason which i explore in the following essay.
To begin with, students are more satisfy when they are able to learn and communicate to their teacher and that was influenced students to do better in the life. Students are always spend most of their time in schools, colleges and university, so this condition is important to student and teacher are most common factor into this condition. They always want to learn somethings from teachers but if they are not learn and contact with teachers correctly, it will be destructive for student life. My life experience is the good example of this. I was not good student in my childhood and do not better in my junior courses. After that my father was taken decision send me to one of my teacher house and the sir suggests me to stay with him untill my secondary exam. This first time i was not good after day by day i was improving my self and helped me to get good result in this exam. I notice that this success was responsible only for my teacher and i always admired him for this opportunity that he gave me. At this conclusion i say that i am now a university student and this student life is also great influence by the university teachers.
Furthermore, If the teachers are not careful about their students , it will be more awful for students life, thats why i think that teachers have more dominance parts in one's student life. Some time students feel trap when they are studying their class so they need good care from teachers. If the teachers make good decision about this student life , this will change the life of student and they enjoy advice from teacher. As i mention me , On of my friend very well in his school life . But he was not able to continue his study as well. one day he diverted into druge and he enjoyed this with her friend . I think this responsibility was of my school teacher, they did not guide him as he needed. That why i think about that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, i feel, i think, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.485 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39834826055 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4425 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0720716554 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232104858536 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916410180603 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111289940851 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214591945149 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890117808865 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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