TPO 19- Independent Task
What an important aspect of human beings' lives which plays a prominent role in their prosperity, to a great extent, is knowledge. Although there is a consequence on its indisputable role, the best way of getting information is still a moot point. Germane to this fact, a question which is the matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether getting infromation from different news sources helps people in being well-informed. Although some people may be on the belief that it is not required, I am personally of the conviction that different sources provide us the opportuinity of being well-informed for two conspicuous reasons.
One compelling reason giving in favor of this thesis is that we will be able to be informed of much information. To elucidate more on this issue, it is obvious that each source of news focuses on specific topics. Thus, if we utilize many news sources, we will have access to a great deal of information that is essential to be well-informed. For instance, one of my friends is passionate about football, and he reads a newspaper every day to get information. But this newspapaer is specilized in politics. One day there was a big political event in our country, and the newspaper allocated many of its pages to this event. Therefore, they did not report a football match that was that day. Consequently, my friend did not become aware of the match and missed it. As you can see, if he utilized different news sources, my friend would be informed of the match.
Another reason which cannot go unnoticed is that by getting information from different news sources, we understand the events better. To shed some light on this premise, it is worth pointing out that each news source has its own reporters. On the other hand, we cannot turn a blind eye on the fact that every reporter has his own interpretations of events which are reflected in his reports. This means that if we get information from different news sources, we will read many points of views that help us in understanding better the truth. For example, last year there was an election in my country, Iran, in which there were two candidates. In order to obtain a better understanding of the candidates' opinoins, I checked five different newspapers and websites. This paved the way for me to make a better decision on whom should I vote to. Moreover, after the elecltion, I realized that many critics had a simillar chose with me. This taught me that if we get information from different sources, we will make better decisions.
To wrap it up, I am personally one of the propnents who cites a clear bias in favor of the theory that to be well-informed, it is essential to get information from many different news sources. To recapitulate the reasons, not only will we be able to have access to a huge amount of information, but also it helps us in obtaining a better understanding of the truth. To my way of thinking, every body should seeks information from different sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere is a consequence on its indisputable role, the best way of getting informatio...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...it is essential to get information from many different news sources. To recapitulate the reaso...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng a better understanding of the truth. To my way of thinking, every body should s...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'seek'
Suggestion: seek
...o my way of thinking, every body should seeks information from different sources.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'on the other hand', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217013888889 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.151041666667 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09375 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0295138888889 0.046263068375 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763888888889 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93988287751 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0329861111111 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00347222222222 0.00188951952338 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.0972222222222 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208333333333 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225694444444 0.0139019557991 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2978.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 516.0 408.028673835 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77131782946 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312015503876 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232558139535 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195736434109 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141472868217 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988287751 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470930232558 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.8719194529 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.64 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7556447502 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.12 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.64 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.8958139535 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.43918918919 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122679913367 0.103427244359 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0605862281266 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464949251979 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148029150954 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421928699398 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00231932442939 0.067059652881 3% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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