Everyone in this world wants to be well informed and updated as to what is happening around him/her. But is it fine to be dependent on just one source of information or one should get information from many different news sources such as news paper, TV, internet etc? Well some people think that it is OK to get information from one source as it is convenient and easy. However, I do not concur with this notion for the following reasons.
To begin with, not all sources of information are reliable. In today’s modern world, life is very tough as there is a lot of competition all around and media is no exception to it. There are many news scamps that have been reported recently which compels me to reconsider if I can believe on one particular media. I can say this strongly because I have experienced it; one of my friends is a news reporter and he was suppose to cover a famous businessman of our city. I happened to accompany him during his interview, he asked him many questions and some of them were quite controversial but later when he aired that interview, I noticed that he had edited it and removed all the important details that was crucial for the general public to know. Hence, I realized how all the news channels fabricate the news that we think is true but in reality what we see is incomplete truth.
Moreover, it is not at all feasible to rely on one resource. To elaborate this point I would like to point out that today most of the people are working and have busy schedule in which it is intricate to sit and watch TV at home. So, people who like to watch news on TV will be deprived of getting information if they are at work or if they are travelling for example I am a stoke broker and it is extremely important for me to keep updating myself about the share market. I went to Mount Abu last summer and I was staying at a place where there was no one to provide news paper. Also, there was no facility of TV but thanks to the technology, I had the facility of internet in my mobile phone, I was able to get news of the entire world. This made me feel the significance of internet and saved me from the potential loses.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention that though we all prefer some or the other media to get knowledge about various things in the world but we all should be flexible enough to accept valuable information from any source as I have made it explicit from the aforementioned examples that one can never predict a situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...tion or one should get information from many different news sources such as news paper, TV, in...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...rom many different news sources such as news paper, TV, internet etc? Well some people thi...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it; one of my friends is a news reporter and he was suppose to cover a famous bus...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... friends is a news reporter and he was suppose to cover a famous businessman of our ci...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ortant details that was crucial for the general public to know. Hence, I realized how all the ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat today most of the people are working and have busy schedule in which it is in...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...if they are travelling for example I am a stoke broker and it is extremely important fo...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...place where there was no one to provide news paper. Also, there was no facility of TV but ...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that one can never predict a situation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.183098591549 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.195171026157 0.158761421928 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0744466800805 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0362173038229 0.046263068375 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0945674044266 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116700201207 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0281690140845 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58186800875 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0482897384306 0.0309702414327 156% => OK
Particles: 0.00201207243461 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.0784708249497 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0160965794769 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0201207243461 0.0139019557991 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2488.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39696312364 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275488069414 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19305856833 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1431670282 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0889370932755 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58186800875 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490238611714 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7816176007 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1176470588 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7841704313 48.84282405 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.352941176 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 46.4235038918 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.00617283951 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273102325014 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134084187708 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741278826924 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50795846466 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17764641438 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116581590472 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463969051551 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399723310511 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0660945658605 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211302963087 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488974336645 0.0618886996521 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.