It is no doubt that successful people have unique talents and qualities. Some people argue that they are successful for they do what they already understand, however, I believe the most important is trying new things and taking risks for the following reasons.
To begin with, the modern society is developing so fast that people have to adapt it as soon as possible to be successful. If you keep on the traditional works, you will fall behind other people who have been successful. For example, no one could imagine that we can use phones to surf the Internet ten years ago and so many profits in this area that various of companies are competing with each other. Like Apple, the first which tries smart phones and takes risks, becomes one of the richest companies in an unbelievable fast speed. On the contrary, once the biggest phone company, Nokie still concentrated on traditional phones causing it declined. Who can first adapt to the fast developed world, who can success.
Then, as the old saying goes that no risks, no successes. Since chances always company with risks, there is no way to success without any risks. Take myself for instance, when I graduated from the university, two choices are faced. One is to still study in this university for master’s degree without risk, the second is to study aboard without knowing which university admits me. It is looks like an adventure or a gambling because it is possible that none of these universities admits you. To have a better future, I choose the second and with hard working I success.
Admittedly, taking risks cannot make you always success, sometimes you may fail. Of course, this could be one important explanation why some people are afraid of taking risks and trying new things. But what they forget is that they also lose the possibility of success if they just do what they are familiar with. So those who avid of risks and new things are always failures.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I firmly consist that, to be successful, there is no way expect taking risks and trying new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, of course, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83473389356 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53733586041 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8639784693 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8421052632 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242095255375 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708507857878 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703512080668 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153850346139 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996898817447 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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