There is no deny that with the fierce competition, more and more people are looking for a job. Thus whether choose a secure job right away or wait for a more satisfying one is really a heat debate. In my point of view, getting a job right away is better for the following reasons.
To begin with, with the fierce competition of looking for jobs, it is unwise to give up any chance you have. Even though it may not seem like your dream job, a secure job at least supports you enough salary to live by yourself or you have to rely on parents without any job. What’ worse, how can anyone promote that the next job is better than the first one? To be honest, waiting just wastes your life and I can show you an example. My brother, Li first got a job as an officer which in most people’s opinion is a secure job. To our surprise, he gave it up and still hoped to a better one, on the contrary, two years were wasted without any better jobs. The reality is truly cruel and it is possible that your dream will never come true thus if there’s any chance, you must try to get it or you may regret forever.
Moreover, one can totally get promotion at work and then one's job is getting more satisfying. There is no doubt that it is hard working that can make you success, not waiting. According to a research by the Economist, more than 90% of bosses are first workers, however, they realize their dreams with the help of experience learned from tens of years’ work. I will still take Li as an example. When he finally accepted the job as an officer, not like most people who wasted time on pleasure, he concentrated all on his work thus soon he was awarded and became a minister which in fact even he never dreamed of. Just by hard working, you can own the chance of a satisfying job.
Admittedly, sometimes there will be more chances if you wait. Though it is true, in fact, a quiet small number of people benefit from waiting. Most people just do nothing but waste time on waiting.
To sum up, considering all the above appoints we can draw a conclusion that getting a job right away is better than waiting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... and more people are looking for a job. Thus whether choose a secure job right away ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... you success, not waiting. According to a research by the Economist, more than 90% of boss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, thus, at least, in fact, no doubt, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36432160804 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34706856315 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520100502513 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4370718687 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.85 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302355478243 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10081548519 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631670603457 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182899443457 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737799476111 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.