TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the tough filed of life, the complexities and the abrupt changing of choices, make so effects on the desires of person and also influence on its way of thinking. In order to achieve success, the man address himself as a worker, which works day and night to the gain the level of his lifestyle. Yes! I immensely agree that, it ought to be a fix rule of success to get into a new materials and involves all type of availability to reach at your destination, there are many reasons to holding this statement, like: engage in the new field of experience, without interruption of risk, never able to recognize your capabilities and be aware with all facts and figures surrounds it take you the certain level of success.

To begin with my first listing, life should follow the great adventurous to take over the command, absorb advantages and disadvantages of every step, in according to difficult kind of situation. You cannot able to do this because of un-bonding of your experience to your livings. You are just stay in a comfort zone, do not even trying to gain more and more. Now, it is important to have a courage and influence yourself to do new experiment, whether it is in work or living life. You have your own material now to solve.

Furthermore, how a person know his/her ability to deal their environment, obviously, it all related to the consequences and results, after inquiring the further details of it, for this, you have to face it. For instance, my dad most of the time, gone through the rough situations of life and he is now a strong man; like a huge mountain, his strength, his position is resembles the hills. Why? Because he had the spirit to interfere his dealings.

Last, but not the least, to reach up to your goal, you have to establish a unify bond with the results, because by involving yourself into the new phase or outside the smooth zone, you are connecting with the most solid and hard state, but, in the end, definitely, success in your door-step, knocking it and will show you the most amazing opportunities of life.

To conclude, it is the most interesting topic to justify because, it contains all the natural essence of a pure and honorable life. The more easier you choose the way, you are taking one step back with the achievements.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 680, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...with all facts and figures surrounds it take you the certain level of success. To...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u have your own material now to solve. Furthermore, how a person know his/her a...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s position is resembles the hills. Why? Because he had the spirit to interfere his deal...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... up to your goal, you have to establish a unify bond with the results, because by invol...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...sence of a pure and honorable life. The more easier you choose the way, you are taking one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64197530864 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68649918183 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565432098765 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.509173697 48.9658058833 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9285714286 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201992265049 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647824419476 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541828294095 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104661269026 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583044034369 0.0645574589148 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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