Nowadays, technology and our environment are changing fast. So, it is essential that we accomplish our work as quickly as possible. Some people think it’s worth to work fast and risk making mistakes rather than work slowly and make sure everything is doing correctly. I disagree with this statement because of the following reasons.
First, making mistake is wasting of time. It is important to do everything correctly to earn goals. People should notice all aspects of everything in their work, consult by experts and then plan for doing that work in details. By doing work quickly, it is more likely that that work is done incorrectly and many mistakes are done. As a result, It should be done again and the time waste. For instance, my manager at work wanted to do everything quickly. We had an important project that should be done on time. But, my manager didn’t take time for planning. By making many mistakes, we miss times. We did not that project on time and our customer did not satisfied.
Second, if we work slowly and notice all details, we can save our money. We can forecast some risks and threatened for our work and do something about preventing them. For instance, my manager did not notice some economic changes and did some new investments. But, by these new investments he lost his consumers and my manager had many lose because of that.
Third, by doing mistakes, people do not trust us and lose our reliability. For instance, when I graduated and started working, my manager all the time asked me to do my work quickly. So, I did it and made a lot of mistakes. My manager did not trust me anymore and he checked all my works again. It was a shameful situation. As a result, I decided to do my work correctly.
To sum up, doing works slowly and correctly is necessary. Doing work quickly and making a lot of mistakes, Cause wasting time and wasting money. Also, people think we are not reliable anymore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 661, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...roject on time and our customer did not satisfied. Second, if we work slowly and notice ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, third, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67543859649 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56960987464 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456140350877 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7794425998 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.2222222222 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07407407407 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284901933441 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875412378665 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861212309259 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189390181014 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10253768849 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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