TPO 25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Adolescents are only paying attention to how they can fulfill their own need rather than others. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
To begin with, juveniles are mostly thinking about their own need such as pleasure, communication with other and education in today's world. Therefore, amount of time which they spend for helping others is declining. My personal experience is compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I was willing to help people who needs financial or mental support. Unfortunately, I hardly had chance in light of absence of financial chance.
Additionally, once I started studying in university, I became not able to help people because I should spend much time on lesson, not because I am reluctant. I am of the opinion that there are magnitude of juveniles who is not able to support other in light of lacking in own chance.
Secondly, nowadays, students tend to consider pleasurable things such as hanging out with friends, watching movie and playing sports significant. Thereby, attitude towards volunteering has been changed since they reckon it is not important to them, which poses unwillingness to gratify the community's expectations. For instance, most of my intimate individuals hardly wants to devote their time for others since people tend to become more selfish in today's society.
Finally, adolescents' parents does not motivate their kids to aid folks because they consider education is magnitude for their children. For this reason, children who is not encouraged probably will not assist others. For example, the last year, when I asked my mother for allowance to do volunteer job, she compelled me to study the lesson and prepare for an exam. For this reason, coincident of lack of time and support of parents stopped me to help others.
In my opinion, body of adolescents is paying attention to the community insufficiently. This is because they or their parents do not want, they do not have enough amount of time because of lesson or other enjoyable things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt to them, which poses unwillingness to gratify the communitys expectations. For...
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Line 8, column 366, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...udy the lesson and prepare for an exam. For this reason, coincident of lack of time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09439528024 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80298083479 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1276199645 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166308824014 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492998471263 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435376608864 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907476758057 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460365674032 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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