Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
I agree with the statement that young people especially these days do not give enough time to communities. Nonetheless, there are few people who truly believe real meaning of life at young days and devote themselves in making society prosperous.
For the first reason, most of the people do not have enough time for their own private life in recent struggling days. They generally keep notion that giving enough time willnot be possible for everyone. Human life is changing daily in several realms like academics, economics. Everybody wants to improve their life through constant thinking about their life. For example, young people getting busy in games and ssocial sites to make friends, and talk with them and make plan for future study. This process keeps on going eternally. And they never realize they have fell on a self-trap and realize late probably at old age that they should have thought of helped the society earlier.
The recent world is full of competitions and challenges. Everyday academic realms is getting competitive due to the necessity of updating and acquiring knowledge through every possible ways of learning like Google, Youtube etc. The challenging days and fast moving time has pressurized everybody to move with full-speed in a sense not looking sideways and their own behind. For example most of young people go abroad for study. Isn't if good to go to pursue their study? And it is true in most of case. At the same time it appears like not giving time to society.
However, it doesnot necessary mean to state that we must focus on ourself, being selfish and narcissit. We can get help and assist from others only if we could think about providing assistance others. At the same time we need to consider who doesn't need help in this planet, as it appears like balancing the social ecosystem and one's behavioral aspect. For instance, we cannot deny life of Nelson Mandela who spend most of his lifetime working for the welfare of people living in his society. Finally he succeeded in emancipation of their past status and restoring in new status in society. Such people are an epitome of panacea to the society.
In sum, people these days are busy in working for themselves, despite they ultimately keep objecctive to help the society in the long-run.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...an for future study. This process keeps on going eternally. And they never realize they ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...through every possible ways of learning like Google, Youtube etc. The challenging da...
^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...st of young people go abroad for study. Isnt if good to go to pursue their study? An...
^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t the same time we need to consider who doesnt need help in this planet, as it appears...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...elfare of people living in his society. Finally he succeeded in emancipation of their p...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91472868217 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47037613486 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2900661808 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6956521739 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292945595409 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787930248811 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847459051477 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168540551863 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731538398577 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...an for future study. This process keeps on going eternally. And they never realize they ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...through every possible ways of learning like Google, Youtube etc. The challenging da...
^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...st of young people go abroad for study. Isnt if good to go to pursue their study? An...
^^^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t the same time we need to consider who doesnt need help in this planet, as it appears...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...elfare of people living in his society. Finally he succeeded in emancipation of their p...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91472868217 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47037613486 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2900661808 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6956521739 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292945595409 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787930248811 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847459051477 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168540551863 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731538398577 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.