Tpo 25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people may hold the opinion that young people do not care responsibly about their communities these days, but others have a different attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, youngsters do not spend adequate time for their communities because not only do they have more focus on their personal life but also nowadays these groups of individuals are less effectual to their members. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
One of the primary causes is that today juveniles are more concentrated on their personal life and they live less socially compare to the past. In other words because rapid development of new technologies and its impact on human’s lifestyle, they should cope with more complexity and accordingly they will be more occupied. In this case people should adapt themselves to this rapid changing of emerging technologies and inventions to keep themselves up-to-dated so they will have less time to help their communities. Furthermore as a consequence of this complexity today young people struggle with a wider sort of concerns. For example one may face some types of problems that they have never existed in the past. Equally important, they encounter more competition in different aspect of their lives. In this situation, caused by population growth and jobs specialization, nowadays one should make greater effort to find a desired job.
There is another factor that deserve some words here. At the present time the importance and effectiveness of communities in their affiliates’ lifestyles have been decreased. Although communities still have a prominent role in societies and people life, members tend to have less dependency on them. In fact because of the spread and availability of information, people achieve higher level of wisdom and knowledge and as a result they may prefer to follow their own values. Indeed they tend to have their selected lifestyle and attitudes and will not commit themselves to communities’ principles. Additionally, societies today include diverse types of communities with contrastive values, cultures and traditions and one may be a member of these variety of communities simultaneously. As an illustration one cannot define exacts border for these communities. For example one may try to help one of his communities and at the same time this action influences another group adversely.
In a word, by taking into account all these factors, we may come to the conclusion that today communities lack the support and help of youngsters due to many reasons, among which, focus of young people on their own life and paling the role of communities in their members’ lifestyles are the most significant ones. It is anticipated that this trend will be maintained in the future and there will be even less involvement of young people in their communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ve less time to help their communities. Furthermore as a consequence of this complexity tod...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...at they have never existed in the past. Equally important, they encounter more competit...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... may prefer to follow their own values. Indeed they tend to have their selected lifest...
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Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this variety' or 'these varieties'?
Suggestion: this variety; these varieties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, for example, in fact, sort of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23799126638 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04812017373 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495633187773 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9025645672 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.95 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18485108103 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575655361913 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468662726954 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131873035651 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424152528205 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.