TPO 25
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities
By and large, it is established beyond any doubt that youth' contribution in society plays a prominent role in its success. It comes as no surprise that efforts to finding the sufficives of youth contributing in helping their society in today's world have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is that whether young people nowadays allocate enough time to help their country or in the past they devoted more time to it. It is commonly accepted that nowadays, youth give enough time for contributing in the society. While there are still those who argue that in the past young people allocated much more time for communities. I, to a great extent, concur with the former idea. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that young people inform about the importance of their contribution and their decisions in society's success and try their best to have great role in flourishing and helping it. It goes without saying that today's world is an informative world which people are really knowledgeable about happening taking place around them. They contribute greatly in their communities and know this fact that the more collaborating of them in the society, the more prosperous their country; thus, they have better place to live.
Another reason deserving some words here is that societies and communities want their people to collaborate with them. Without any shadows of doubt in today's world people have more right to freely give their ideas and notions to the governments and governments accept this ideas, too. In the past the, most of the countries were tyranny and a small number of people guide the whole society, but today the rules are changed and societies want their people to collaborate and help them in organizing and enacting appropriate roles. Statistics show societies that youth are involved in crucial decisions are more prosperous than countries which do not use their young people. So, countries are more inclined toward using their young force.
Finally, yet importantly, nowadays people especially young people have more free time, so, they allocate it to helping their community. In the past youth forced to work alongside their study, but in today's world youth do not oblige to work because of the suitable economic condition and they just study. They devote their leisure time to effective works like helping their community. Perhaps a more specific example can shed more light on the matter. My friends and I work as volunteer teachers for helping poor children in small communities in remote areas in our leisure time. While as I know, in the past there was no time for people to do this kind of works.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that nowadays youth give enough time to helping their country since not only are they informed about the importance of their decisions in the country, but also the communities want young people to collaborate with them. It is highly recommended that governments prepare an appropriate bed for youth to share their ideas for having a prosperous country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
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Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...eir community. In the past youth forced to work alongside their study, but in todays wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, regarding, so, still, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, kind of, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2719.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08224299065 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64000015881 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469158878505 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8381019329 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.217391304 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350895820789 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111092845178 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868226131892 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227037698764 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460616826191 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.