Opportunities are around the world these days. It is the people who need to decide what they want there life to be. It is totally understandable that a secure life is the need of today, but I believe doing something for this mere reason is like laying boundaries for oneself. When it comes to a job, it would be better for a person to wait for one that would be more satisfying rather than taking a secure job right away. A desired job will make a person happier and fill him with a sense of accomplishment.
When a person is going through a dilemma of choosing a path in life, he should always ask one question to himself. If he wants to look back in his life and say "I am happy I did it", or, "I wish, I did it". A problem stated clearly is a problem half solved. Choosing a secure job might run a person's house for years, but he will not be satisfied thinking that if he would have waited for sometime, he could have done better. The job may not be that bad, but it will never be that good to the person who initially had wings of his own, crushed by the burden of responsibilities and growing competition in the society. The famous author and leadership coach Mr. Robin Sharma too got stuck in his life's maze when he chose a secure job. He was never satisfied till he left it all, and started living the life he always wanted to. Now, he has become what he knew he was capable of.
The most important reason for giving oneself an opportunity to do better is the sense of accomplishment and victory one experiences when he gets a dream job. Some people actually wait, working hard to get a job that would take time to enter their lives but do them way better than a secure job in terms of growth, happiness and life. Once a person gets the job of his dreams, there is a positive energy which flows like a magical charm. He gains immense confidence and a trust in himself that he can do whatever he wants to if he puts in the same intensity of hard work, discipline and dedication. It automates the life to do better in each situation to reach better milestones.
However money a secure job might earn for a person, till he is not happy doing it, there is no meaning to his life and efforts. He will never be able to enjoy his life to the fullest, and to the extent he deserves to do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had waited'?
Suggestion: had waited
...ll not be satisfied thinking that if he would have waited for sometime, he could have done better...
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Line 3, column 777, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'till the left'?
Suggestion: till the left
...se a secure job. He was never satisfied till he left it all, and started living the life he ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ituation to reach better milestones. However money a secure job might earn for a per...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197556008147 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.181262729124 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0549898167006 0.0866891130778 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549898167006 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0997963340122 0.0685040099705 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0835030549898 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0386965376782 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4427494332 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386965376782 0.0309702414327 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0020366598778 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0957230142566 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0285132382892 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0224032586558 0.0139019557991 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2316.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 440.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26363636364 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254545454545 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.156818181818 0.251872472559 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0909090909091 0.174417080927 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0613636363636 0.112833075102 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4427494332 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.2315359521 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2428028694 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.35 0.644075263715 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 37.6818181818 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.951515151515 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329511122588 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0959756073778 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690282586324 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.472117685598 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158632387276 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123952692887 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881749692146 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.412508164662 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0663883617584 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247113209036 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062211106564 0.0618886996521 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.