The passage states that due to the increasing human population and their demand for food has a harmful effect on the wildlife of United States. Most particularly, the bird population has decreased considerably and will continue to decrease in the future. The speaker counters this by saying that it is true that the growing human population has had many adverse effects on the bird population but there are certain advantages that came up with the new advancements of human settlements.
Firstly, the passage states that since the human population grows, there grows a vital demand for shelter and business. Shelter is provided by inhabiting forest lands, wetlands and grasslands. These lands are also used to build malls and other means of entertainment and business for people. It ultimately results in a loss of natural habitats for birds. But, the speaker contradicts by putting the example of pigeons on streets, or hawks and falcons preying on these pigeons, which are found in the human settlements. This proves that the birds get a larger habitat to live in, even after forest lands are used to build human shelter.
Secondly, the passage suggests that due to the growing population the demand for food naturally increases. This results in growth of agricultural activities in the forest areas, hence, loss of birds habitat. The speaker has another answer to this when she explains that United States have already come up with a solution of using crops that are so productive that they do not need a lot of land to grow in. This gives rise to more varieties of crops grown in a smaller land area.
Ultimately, pesticides use obviously increases with the increased agricultural practices. As stated in the passage, this causes contamination of water, poisons the insects over which it is used. This further, poisons the birds who feed on these insects or contaminated water, reducing the bird population. But according to the speaker, this problem was a part of history. Keeping the birds in mind, people came up with two solutions to this problem. First, the new pesticides are being used in the agricultural fields now which are much less toxic. Second, there is a growing trend to grow pest resistant crops which are unattractive for the birds to hover over them and get themselves poisoned.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.261695866417 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.165094339623 0.158904122519 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0896226415094 0.0723426182421 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0330188679245 0.0435111971325 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188679245283 0.0277247811725 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127358490566 0.128828473217 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0589622641509 0.0370669169778 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69496777184 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306603773585 0.0208969081088 147% => OK
Particles: 0.00707547169811 0.00154638098197 458% => OK
Determiners: 0.122641509434 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00235849056604 0.0158828679856 15% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0114777025283 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2308.0 1645.83664459 140% => OK
No of words: 384.0 271.125827815 142% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01041666667 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.04852973271 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348958333333 0.374372842146 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270833333333 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174479166667 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1171875 0.113142543107 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69496777184 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 145.348785872 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518229166667 0.539623497131 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.7924038567 53.8517498576 105% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0529801325 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.761518916 49.3711431718 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 132.220823453 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 21.7502111507 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.878197800319 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 46.2833333333 50.5018328374 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.01086956522 1.90840788429 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.666126000413 0.549887131256 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11291762239 0.142949733639 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0712623935869 0.0787303798458 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511135062484 0.631733273073 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130581081307 0.139662658121 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256635041565 0.266732575781 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831089918388 0.103435571967 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.410957460938 0.414875509568 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0375886955596 0.0530846634433 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.477171211536 0.40443939384 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378134000974 0.0528353158467 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.49668874172 257% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.2958057395 165% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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