There is no doubt that teachers are the most important part in our society. They are the one's significantly effect the education process and quality of education. Although, Some people believe that, regardless of salaries, university professors should be eager to pass their education massage to their studens, I believe that university shoud invest more money in university professors salers to better adance our education process. The basis dor my views is as the follow.
Giving a exceptional salary to university professor, encourage them to do more. Of course, money should not be a periority for university professors as education. However, money is also important factor in the professors lives. Without a good salary, professor could be distracted with life expenses ans financial burdens. In contrast, professor who get good salary are more focus in their tasks. For instance, they are more detecated to improve their students progress, emplement new teaching stratagies and condacted more lab experiments. Defenitely, a better salary can have a positive effect on university professor.
In addition to the previous reasons, spending more money on professors salary eleminate bias. Despite their image in our society, Teachers are also weak aganist the strong purchase power of the American Dollars. In fact, professors have some dream too. For example, they dream to give a best education for their childrens, buy a nice home or travell all over the word. In their endeover to achieve their ultimate goals, some professor neglect their main tasks. For instance, they start to accept money in extchange of boost students score, give privet lessons, and biase to childrens from business background families. Howere, if university helped them to achieve their dreem by giving them good salary, professors will focus only on their previousely assigned tasks nothing more.
As a conclusion, we can say that compare to their contribution in building our childrens future, teachers should get the highest salery in the society. An exeptional salary encourage professor to stay focus and reduce bias. There for inversities should do their utmost to invest more in professor salaries.
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Essay evaluation report
They are the one's significantly effect the education process
They are the ones who significantly affect the education process
They are the ones significantly affecting the education process
Giving a exceptional salary to university professor, encourage them
Giving a exceptional salary to university professor encourages them
money is also important factor
money is also an important factor
professor who get good salary are
professors who get good salary are
spending more money on professors salary eleminate bias.
spending more money on professors salary eleminates bias.
to give a best education
to give the best education
some professor neglect their main tasks.
some professors neglect their main tasks.
we can say that compare to their contribution
we can say that comparing to their contribution
An exeptional salary encourage professor to stay
An exeptional salary encourages professor to stay
Sentence: Although, Some people believe that, regardless of salaries, university professors should be eager to pass their education massage to their studens, I believe that university shoud invest more money in university professors salers to better adance our education process.
Error: adance Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: studens Suggestion: student
Error: salers Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Of course, money should not be a periority for university professors as education.
Error: periority Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Without a good salary, professor could be distracted with life expenses ans financial burdens.
Error: ans Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance, they are more detecated to improve their students progress, emplement new teaching stratagies and condacted more lab experiments.
Error: emplement Suggestion: implement
Error: stratagies Suggestion: strategies
Error: detecated Suggestion: detected
Error: condacted Suggestion: conducted
Sentence: In addition to the previous reasons, spending more money on professors salary eleminate bias.
Error: eleminate Suggestion: eliminate
Sentence: Despite their image in our society, Teachers are also weak aganist the strong purchase power of the American Dollars.
Error: aganist Suggestion: against
Sentence: For example, they dream to give a best education for their childrens, buy a nice home or travell all over the word.
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
Error: travell Suggestion: travel
Sentence: In their endeover to achieve their ultimate goals, some professor neglect their main tasks.
Error: endeover Suggestion: endeavor
Sentence: For instance, they start to accept money in extchange of boost students score, give privet lessons, and biase to childrens from business background families.
Error: biase Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: privet Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: extchange Suggestion: exchange
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
Sentence: Howere, if university helped them to achieve their dreem by giving them good salary, professors will focus only on their previousely assigned tasks nothing more.
Error: previousely Suggestion: previously
Error: dreem Suggestion: dream
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can say that compare to their contribution in building our childrens future, teachers should get the highest salery in the society.
Error: salery Suggestion: salary
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
Sentence: An exeptional salary encourage professor to stay focus and reduce bias.
Error: exeptional Suggestion: exceptional
Sentence: There for inversities should do their utmost to invest more in professor salaries.
Error: inversities Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 24 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 24 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1795 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.233 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.662 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.2 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n process. The basis dor my views is as the follow. Giving a exceptional salary to univ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or my views is as the follow. Giving a exceptional salary to university profes...
^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...professors lives. Without a good salary, professor could be distracted with life ...
^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
...revious reasons, spending more money on professors salary eleminate bias. Despite their im...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...am too. For example, they dream to give a best education for their childrens, buy...
^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: ALL_OVER_THE_WORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...r childrens, buy a nice home or travell all over the word. In their endeover to achieve their ult...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 761, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...focus only on their previousely assigned tasks nothing more. As a conclusion,...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... get the highest salery in the society. An exeptional salary encourage professor...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298200514139 0.229887763892 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.13881748072 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0874035989717 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0334190231362 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0694087403599 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105398457584 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0179948586118 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75820856222 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385604113111 0.0309702414327 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668380462725 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205655526992 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00514138817481 0.0139019557991 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2196.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 343.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40233236152 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425655976676 0.338922669872 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32944606414 0.251872472559 131% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.265306122449 0.174417080927 152% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.180758017493 0.112833075102 160% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75820856222 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.069996824 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3333333333 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2351387079 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 49.2779397473 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.74468085106 1.45489161554 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278420858062 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0685946310032 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540976755572 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433851652407 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10634180564 0.151897553556 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103258250331 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614202120462 0.0781384742642 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37080655781 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052972746284 0.067059652881 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204656590142 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423161883036 0.0618886996521 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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