Nowadays, with the accelerating development of the societies, people found it hard to schedule their working hours. Accordingly, some believed that it is a better idea to have only three days a week job with long hours, however, the others think that, five days job with regular hours are more convenient. From the eyes of writer, having five days with shorter hours is more enjoyable and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First of all, five-day job provide many opportunities to one who wants to earn a lot of money. The reason is in the working hours in which a person can also do part-time job besides his regular jobs. This would provide good income for person. Take my experience as an example; when I was working in a construction and building company, I preferred to choose five-day job and besides worked as a shopkeeper in the afternoon. The second job, could increase my income in which each three month I doubled my money. Hence having new part-time job can increase your prosperity and in consequence let you touch your dreams in lower time.
Another reason which deserves some words to mention is that five-day job will keep you always fresh. In this regard, you will never fall take apart of your job and continuously know what to do. Recently, I saw a documentary about humans’ job. The documentary reported an important consequence of research that has been carried out by University of California. It asserts that people who have five-day job are always keep contact to their jobs and as result they do their job with more enthusiasm and have more passion to do their job painstakingly. This program also demonstrates that whenever people accomplished their job, the get rid of nervous and this is the time they feel happy.
However, in the eyes of detractor, like any possible choices, this may poses some drawbacks. There are many people throughout the world who work far from their family. In this situation, people may found it easier to choose three-day job. For instance, my brother has a job in oil Petroleum Company. Since his job is far distance of his family home, he chose three-day job which provide his the opportunity to see his family every single week. Therefore, as the example shows, people live in different circumstances and they cannot be judge by only one possible method. Different method maybe suit different people based on their situation.
All in all, as the above- mentioned examples have illustrated, it is a better idea to have five-day job with shorter time hours. Not only does it help people feel fresh, but also it helps them to increase their revenue by choosing a part time job. Albeit, there may be some people who cannot make any decision between having five or three day job. In this situation, they should conform themselves to the situation and choose three-day job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: apart from
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...cision between having five or three day job. In this situation, they should conform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85975609756 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61857648198 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493902439024 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5277315018 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9615384615 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379809963235 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105442161952 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787550521405 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238294792974 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718649010725 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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