TPO 31
That the modern life awards human beings a great number of facilities which has modified their life in many perspectives cannot be ignored. The point, nonetheless, cannot be also brushed under the carpet that today's human is not as satisfied as a century ago. Among a lot of profound reasons which should be considered for this matter the fact that fast pace of today's life is the main theme of them is noteworthy. This essay will elaborate upon the role of today's hectic life on the poeple's feelings towards life.
First, the meaning of being fortunate in human being's eye has been changed. People nowadays call themselves fortunate according to their possessions, not even their internal ones but their physical acquisitions such as house, car, and so on. In addition, due to technological changes happening every single second, greedy human beings cannot gratify with the very possessions they have. While they want to renovate everything and keep up-to-date with technological changes, they should work harder to gain more for a none definite reason. By doing so, not only cannot they find any internal certain reason to live happily, but they have also lost their tranquility in the hustle and bustle of running to catch up the renovations.
Moreover, human being enjoying others' company is a social creature. This trait urges both living in a compact society and contacting the members of it in order to satisfy this inherent desire. The fast pace has also gotten this opportunity from people these days. Although networks such as Facebook provide a new way of contact with more than one hundred at the same time, sociological research has showed more people use those networks, more they feel a sense of loneliness. Therefore, an individual working until late night to earn more possessions to feel more happier and fortunate and having not enough time to spend with their friend eye to eye finds social networks the only way to fill the hole of loneliness which neither solve this problem nor decrease this sense.
In conclusion, considering the point that this today's hectic life not only increases the pace of life, but it has altered a large number of issues as a result of this speed, the fact that human beings these days are lonelier, unsatisfied, and in turn unhappier would be perceivable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e on the poeples feelings towards life. First, the meaning of being fortunate in...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... night to earn more possessions to feel more happier and fortunate and having not enough tim...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... conclusion, considering the point that this todays hectic life not only increases t...
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Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...es the pace of life, but it has altered a large number of issues as a result of this speed, the f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255868544601 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.145539906103 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117370892019 0.0866891130778 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539906103286 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037558685446 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112676056338 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0516431924883 0.0351676179071 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57199546671 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00234741784038 0.00188951952338 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.107981220657 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018779342723 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093896713615 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2310.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96899224806 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348837209302 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227390180879 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160206718346 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105943152455 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57199546671 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578811369509 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 67.8665158691 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5098017575 48.84282405 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 48.5390180879 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.77227722772 1.45489161554 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118683268767 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861392298115 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531301807844 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19827901011 0.151897553556 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260446010531 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0668722807035 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.