By developing each aspect of this hectic era, people face with high-slop changes, which affect directly on their mood, such as being happy or satisfied enough to have the best lifestyles. When it comes to this point, many people want to know whether the mentioned influences make people happier or satisfied in compared to the past or not. I personally believe that current lifestyles show that people are more better regarding their moods. In what follows, I will delve into couple of reasons to shed light on my response.
First, modern lifestyle experiences better condition of social communication. Being thankful to technology developments, many software and applications have been produced for people to have really easier communications, in compared to the past, in which people should do several difficult steps to reach a simple way of talking with each other. As the modern lifestyles are provided with better communication systems, people can be aware of each other easier and never do they feel being alone, which leads to be unhappy people. Thus, people in this modern life are happier and more satisfied. As I remember, my grandfather always told us that they had never had a simple way to talk with my father, who lived in a foreign country. My father's parents were really concerned about my father's situation because they were not aware of his mood.
Second, should the modern people are more happier and satisfied than the past, they have better financial situations. In general, people in the past were concerned about how they could buy a house for themselves, and never did many of them buy any. In this modern span, people have options too use mortgages for buying their survival needs. So, financial situations of people have been improved, thanks to the developed financial tools. When I was an eighteen years old child, my father told me that he had not been able to construct a house or buying it for my after-marriage periods, but he continued that he was not concerned as much as his father had been, owing to the fact that people in these days can use mentioned mortgages for buying such items, and start to pay them back by their even low salaries.
One reason that repudiates the above reasons is that people face with more difficult competition systems than the past. As many political and commercial events occurred, many governments are concerned with winning against the others, so they may cause lots of pressures which directly influence on people's lifestyles, and make them less happy people. For example, during houses' crisis of 2008, governments started to lower the interest rates, which caused many bad effects on people's lives. Many people had to give up against this problem, and lost their houses.
To recapitulate, we can conclude that people are happier and more satisfied than past lifestyles, even among the unavoidable changes. It is because these changes provide not only better communication situations but also, better financial conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...current lifestyles show that people are more better regarding their moods. In what follows,...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ng thankful to technology developments, many software and applications have been pro...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... Second, should the modern people are more happier and satisfied than the past, they have ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to use'?
Suggestion: to use
...n this modern span, people have options too use mortgages for buying their survival nee...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... but also, better financial conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, thus, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63837196036 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502016129032 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0716134155 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245926418235 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814604533158 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445264037406 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149353162018 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344590406051 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.