Based on the given materials, the article as well as the lecture discusses Torreya taxifoha, which is a well-known evergreen tree in Florida during 1950s, and is in danger of getting extinct. The author states that there are several viable solutions regarding resistance of the extinction. That being said, the lecturer provides several ideas to repudiate these solutions.
Initially, the writer says that since many Torreya taxifoha have lived in the northern part of Florida due to its climate which was wet and cool, reestablishing these trees in the similar pinpoints could be an effective solution. However, the speaker explains that it cannot be a successful option owing to the fact that coolest and dampest parts of north Florida have been affected by climate changes, which are results of either global warming phenomenon or drained wetlands of that area. Thus, current northern part of Florida is not counted as a required environment for Torrreya taxifoha growth.
Second, the author proclaims assisted migrations in which Torreya seeds and saplings will be moved to different cooler locations, further northern parts. Yet again, the lecturer exemplifies the assisted migration of black local trees; by relocating these trees in the north, they spread quickly and killed other plant species of the environment. Thus, if Torreya seeds are relocated in the new environment, the other plant species would be found in danger, owing to the fact that based on black local tree example, assisted migrations would bring out several demerits to the new environment.
The final point of contention between the reading and the listening passage is preserving Torreya in laboratories. The writer thinks that an artificial controlled environment, like research centers, makes researchers able to protect and conduct researches on Torreya, in order to find a way to continue their surviving. On the other hand, the speaker underscores that held population of Torreya in labs is not enough to resist diseases; They should be large enough and genetically diversified to survive against diseases. It results in having huge amounts of seeds which needs enough capacity in research centers, and actually this option is not practical in long-term.
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- TPO 33 Integrated Writing Task 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1950s'.
Suggestion: during the 1950s
... a well-known evergreen tree in Florida during 1950s, and is in danger of getting extinct. T...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Torreya seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
... Initially, the writer says that since many Torreya taxifoha have lived in the northern par...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 353.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37393767705 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7350185486 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1180075308 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.923076923 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174379152279 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578568353257 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052237647736 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980144556921 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052502482316 0.0443174109184 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 63.6247240618 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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