TPO 31_ Independent--
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the world is under considerable changes everyday. Different technologies and gadgets are invented each months aiming to make the life easier and enjoyable. Although some people believe that the current days is not as good as the past, I feel that our current life is totally different from the life in the past and people have more pleasant moments in their current life. I contend this way for two reasons which I will explore them in the following essay.
To begin with, currently, we have different kinds of communication technologies which we can use them for being kept in touch with our relatives and friends that are living in different places. As an example, I have an aunt living in Texas, USA, which we are talking over Skype every week and we know about the personal life of each other. This communication happens only because of the advancement in technologies and the changes in the world. Fifty years ago, as my grandma says, they were not aware of the persons that had already immigrated to another country or even another city at all.
Secondly, in the current life, the people have lots of opportunities to have fun and make pleasant moments for themselves. For example, they can easily travel to another continent and become familiar with various cultures in the world while it was not possible in the past due to far distance and difficulty of traveling by ships or vehicles that were available at the time. Moreover, if people want to stay in their hometown or home country, different entertainment programs are available for them such as movies, dance clubs, amusement parks, etc.
To sum up, although some people think the life in the past was better than now, I prefer the current life and I am happy with it. Although people in the past were close together, they had various problems which we can't think about them now. Currently, we are able to do various fun activities to make the moments enjoyable while the people in the past were not able to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...the world is under considerable changes everyday. Different technologies and gadgets are...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vies, dance clubs, amusement parks, etc. To sum up, although some people think th...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...her, they had various problems which we cant think about them now. Currently, we are...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i feel', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215789473684 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.139473684211 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0947368421053 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0710526315789 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136842105263 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53126636069 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289473684211 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00263157894737 0.00188951952338 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0973684210526 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00789473684211 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184210526316 0.0139019557991 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1991.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 345.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77101449275 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310144927536 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24347826087 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150724637681 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0985507246377 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53126636069 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.0337632675 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6428571429 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4574987853 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.214285714 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.9906832298 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.42 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361301498331 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112945555115 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704449589593 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564744603823 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14014216221 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161425566457 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649393662521 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409053130284 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033276547381 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267231240179 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499351026818 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.