What are the indicators of happiness? There are various factors that plays role in happiness- higher jobs, fulfillment of aims, higher quality of life. As the world is changing, people have to deal with multiple stuffs, are occupied mostly with their work or task for the fulfillment of dreams; as a result most people, in modern day, are unsatisfied with their life.
We have heard the maxim" happiness lies today not tomorrow", but nowadays people hardly remember this maxim because people have to deal with various issue- they have to work in office, in home, take care of their children, other stuffs such as paying loans to bank, bills etc; thus they bare enjoy a weekends. For instance, my dad barely have free time. He is obsessed with jobs, hoarding money to pay my tuition fees, new plans for his retirement, so he had a mental stress. Similarly, such situation is seen in my uncle also.
Recently, most children are taught- nothing is impossible. So we become ambitious about dream and our dream will be colossal. But when children go through various stage of life, only handful children will achieve such success,while most of them will be brooding over their failure. You can take an example of my class: In high school, Most of the student wanted to be a doctor and we were pretty sure that they would have been a doctor by 25 years. Unfortunately, only 2 out of 50 students were able to fulfill their aims, leaving rest to anguish about their failure.
However, some may argue with the development of technology, there is increase in quality of life. In a facile way, people are getting their basic needs than in past, but I still insist in modern people the level of dissatisfaction is higher because with the development of technology, work became so cumbersome, so complex. In past if people have to some farming, we would be worry about additional things but in present day, farmer have to deal with buying a higher quality seeds and fertilizer, dealing with merchant about price.
The aforementioned reason plays vital role in deterioration of people happiness and such insidious factors are increasing in the life of modern people. Therefore, I believe that people are less happy than past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rly, such situation is seen in my uncle also. Recently, most children are taught...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ndful children will achieve such success,while most of them will be brooding over thei...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rgue with the development of technology, there is increase in quality of life. In...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a facile way" with adverb for "facile"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... there is increase in quality of life. In a facile way, people are getting their basic needs t...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ople are getting their basic needs than in past, but I still insist in modern people th...
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Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: I_AM_WORRY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
...eople have to some farming, we would be worry about additional things but in present ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89182058047 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6464629856 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554089709763 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2033793037 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.058823529 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235570090992 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733330788759 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703834270275 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141960987614 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518545854594 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.