Development of mass media have made people easier to get an information. but do we have to be informed about the news which are not affecting our daily life? There is a fervor debate about this issue. Personally, I believe being updated, whether it influence our life or not, is vital in modern world.
To start with, World nowadays is becoming smaller since with the advent of highly designed and sophisticated transportation system, we can travel all around the world within few hours. As a result, world is becoming a melting pots of various countries. So even though it will not affect our life, for it can affect it on rare occasion such as going aboard for refreshment or other exciting activities. Imagine we going to Pakistan or Afghanistan, without knowing what is going on, can led in certain tribulation or adversity. However, by knowing events what occurring on other part of world helps to frustrate such privation.
Second, the reason for extent horizon. By knowing about activities taking place in world, we can consolidate our knowledge and can learn about world politics too. Even though it may not be influential part of our life, but it can be helpful for taking future precaution. The recent attack, for instance, in turkey made Nepalese people to take consideration of providing tight security in Religious places. It also help to extend our knowledge to deal with things such as global warming or climate changes as other countries are working on it.
Moreover, having a updated with information is useful for career growth because we don't know what we may need in life.
We may have to deal with quizzes of current events, or need new way of doing things, so updated information aids to deal with things. Certain countries are suffering from civil violence, for instance and knowing about these countries will help to deal with challenges when inhabitants of country belongs to different races and ethnics groups.
In conclusion, having information about activities occurring in world helps us in many indirect ways as it provides the knowledge to deal with things, or how to prevent them. Therefore, I insist everyone should be updated about events taking place in world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0027173913 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68561722417 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1816948596 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8947368421 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195450901874 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635839551147 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043418357869 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106925845207 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289985734433 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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