"Increase and change is goal's people in life" Bertrand Russell one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that changing is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. Affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that however, whether the world alter and increase make a people happy and satisfied or make them unhappy and sad has a sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, a huge extent, agree in favor of the former standpoint.
In the ensuring paragraph I will try to shed some light in my perspective through some ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
On the one hand, it is crystal clear that technology can help populaces for many thing and happen in people's life. It helps people improve knowledge. Publics in the past have hard time in life. Today all work is simple due to every day have many instrument that can make better life. For example, in my life my father has car go to the work and this is the best way for time or all people exactly my family have mobile phone so call with all people and can make appointment and solve many difficult situation in their life. It is very useful. for instance, I love my mobile phone and it makes me glad due to I call my friends and send photo another point I can call to my aunt that she is foreign country and speak to him.
On the second hand, there is no doubt that technology can make people n early. All people can communication together with equipment. As an example I will apply for my study accounting in the Germany and I will go there and I continue my education. Plane help me go to the Germany with simple way in 4 or 5 hours. Another example my government can go to other country and make many agreement without any concern. It is stunning effect.
Finally, nobody can deny that technology helps people can reduce disease. There is positive effect for people in all world. Doctors can reclaim people with drag and surgery. It is very useful. I do absolutely agree with increase technology and help people and children due to in the past children and people die without recognize to solve her problem. As a result this is important because it is hazardous and danger. Abruptly people fine plant and can change her life. I feel great when I go to the hospital and see people which doctor can search new way for disease. Healthy life can make folklore happy. For example, my father had disease about eyes 2-years ego. We was really sad but one doctor in the Germany can help my father thus folklore in all world cannot sad when skill help them. If your idea did helping can make people sad?
to make long story, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above your head statement, we can soon realize that the world is changing so quickly, people now are satisfied with their live than people were in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54734848485 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39075998954 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469696969697 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.3352246098 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4516129032 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0322580645 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51612903226 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20594925056 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602833658814 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596984404109 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125511354974 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768278423767 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.