Satisfaction is the feeling when people are being entertained either physically or mentally, which results in a sense of happy. It seems that, as the world develops, the lower demands can be easily satisfied whereas the upper demands grow, and people are hard to please. But that is a myth.As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.
As the social productivity promotes, the living qualities have far been better. More and more people around the world do not need to worry about where the next meal comes, or how to make it through the winter. The number of Chinese travelers this year has grown to 120 million people, ten times as the number five years ago. My father lived at the countryside in his childhood and has seven siblings. The best time for them around the year was the wedding, when they could share a fish together. The only motif for him to study was the lunch at the school, which, of course, was no better than simply porridge. Meanwhile, studying saved him from working in the field. Nowadays, we have machineries in the field; we have to worry about the waste foods. The time when our living demands could narrowly be met have passed, and people are physically surely more satisfied.
Furthermore, along with the increasing upper demands, the entertainments vary as well. Thanks to the developments of the technology, people have come up with all sorts of ways for the entertainment, like the Play Stations, the sports facilities, the Internets, etc. Twenty years ago, we could only play some card games or watch TV, while we can travel around the world and surf on the Internet today. The VR tech can virtualize your craziest fantasy, allowing you to befriend the Captain America or confront the aliens. Numbers of social networking applications like Twitter or Facebook have united us together, sharing other families daily life. The technology has finally changed the world into Neverland where no one grows up and lives happy.
To draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products. The advance in physical and mental life will provides people with a happier life. So although some believe that people are less happy than before, I deem we are more satisfied in such a changing world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ere no one grows up and lives happy. The sense of accomplishment is another part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, whereas, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96163682864 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78033935972 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570332480818 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0637369758 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14639534391 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402862406599 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321563342047 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078550313372 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272564934491 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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