The life is change day after day, year after year. Alot of things go and more are come . change of life give us different taste and fiffernt point of view from the past. some peole believe that because the world is changing so fast, people now are unhappy and less satisfied and other disagree. In my personal point of view i strongly agree that changes of the world make people more happy and satisfied. I will illustrate my opioin in the following paragraphs.
First, changes of the world make our life more easy. what i mean is now we have alot of applicanses and tools that help us to do our daily activities more easy. Each on of us have his own car to use it . cars make our life fantastic . we can do whatever we need without any limitation. Comparing to the past we faced many obusticles to do our daily activites. We used to use the old fasion transportaion which was inconvienet at all. This is just on aspect in our new world in contrast with the past.
Second , people can comunicate more easy.
Nowadays we have alot of communication ways like cell phones, facebook, skype, whatsapp, many andriods applications and internet connection. Simply the easy was to communicate with other people the more happiness you can have. On the other hand people in the past they were suffering to communicate. there were not any easy manner to contact each other specially overseas. As you can see now we can catch our relatives , our family and our friends just in a second.
Third, High level of technology equel to high level of satsfiaction.
we can see now a huge inovated devices like microwaves, dishwasher, television, ovenes, mobile phone, laptops and cromecast.
these high advanced technology make our daily life more easy and get our selves more satisfied. when you look to the past you can find that we were not have any from there. the life was very hard , very boring . peole had hard time to do just simple activities. However, now we can finish alot of metions in just couple of hours. These technology gave our life colourful meaning. Now i can say we have tastey and easy life.
In sum, do you agree that without these changes and inovation in our modern life we could not have these easy and happy life comparing by our old fasion life in the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, third, as to, i mean, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62128712871 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49410360707 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487623762376 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5454383218 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2333333333 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4666666667 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156059436809 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466379747585 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593750440985 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744805394983 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581809769329 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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