Nowadays, we are living in very dynamic world. We can touch the fast movement of our daily lives and our daily activities. Many changes had been done at many fields around us. I am sure that some people will agree that because the world is changing so fast, people now are less happy than before, while others might disagree with that. However, I am totally agreed that people are so happy and satisfied with these changes than before for two important reasons, which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays, we have more advanced technologies everywhere that help people to enjoy their lives. We can find more changes at schools, works, sports, cinemas, computers and entertainments. I believe that these changes let people get their work done easier than before. For instance, I used to work as a pharmacy technician at independent pharmacy. I need to search for answers for many questions every day. For example, I need to know much information about how patients should take their medications, what is the rights dose and directions for many drugs. In addition, I meet many people every day ask me many questions about topics that I do not have any clue about them. So, I have to search about the appropriate answers for these issues. In the past, I used to write down all these questions and look at hundreds of books to get the answers. In fact, that way was so hard and took me so long. On the other hand, nowadays, I can open my phone and search on google about any topic and i can get the answer in just a minute. I believe the modern technology like new cell phones and computer gave me a good opportunity to save time and effort. So, I can enjoy this time with my family or even to improve my work in the same time. As you can see, this experience taught me that the new way of technologies made our lives easier than before. In addition, people became happier with this dynamic world.
In addition, we have the most up to date ways of treatment for many chronic diseases which help many people to cure faster than before. We can see every day that someone discovered new drug to treat a specific disease. Definitely, if we have a good manner to treat people from their suffering they would be happier and more satisfied. For example, my grandmother was suffering from breast cancer for a long time. Moreover, there was not any, medication for cancer. So, all my family was in pain and sadness because of her. On the other hand, we can find now much chemotherapy for many types of cancer all over the world. In fact, my grandmother started her medication and now she feels much better. In addition, she can do her daily activities by herself. So, my whole family is so happy and we can see her in a better case. This experience was a good example of the modern way of technology and how these tremendous changes were the secret behind the happiness of many people around us.
In sum, I believe that people are so happy and more satisfied with that fast changes. This is because their lives became easier, and because they found new ways to treat their patient. So they are happier than before. I strongly agree that we have to encourage these fast changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1001, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd search on google about any topic and i can get the answer in just a minute. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2631.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56770833333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41914920283 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435763888889 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 834.3 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 9.59856630824 302% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3642965346 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1714285714 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4571428571 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45714285714 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269488975562 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703267927452 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791255890589 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203317525207 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083759267813 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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