There is no shortage of debate about the quality of life, few of them support that life is better in these days and people are happy, however few of them are not agree with them. In my opinion, yes, these days individuals are not happy and satisfied with their lives. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, In modern days individuals are stressed with their lives, they are running behind money because money is the only thing, which can fulfil their needs. In the old days people are more satisfied with their jobs. They depend on the basic needs, for example, food, clothes and house. They spend enough time with their family and talk about their lives. However, these days people want to live a luxurious life and fulfil their needs they are working more and more, even sometimes they do a wrongful act for the money. Individuals don’t have enough time for their own family. As a result, they are to satisfied with their lives. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My life is full of stress, I have a tremendous work pressure and to achieve all my dream I need money and for that, I have to work hard. In this way I am not getting enough time for the family. Sometimes I feel depressed. However, according to my grandfather, in his old days, there was no such kind of pressure. The people’s need was limited, not like these days, and people lived happily with their family. Therefore, I believe that the old days are the golden days.
Secondly, In the old days, individuals were healthier than our current generation. They eat healthy and nutritious food, however, we are away from such kind of food. In weekdays, most of us eat junk foods from the restaurant, which is not good for the health. It leads several kinds of disease. For instance, my grandfather, he is 95 years old, but still fit and healthy, however, I am only, 30 year old but suffering from high blood pressure and diabetes. Therefore, in my view, old days are much better than current situations.
For conclusion, in old days people were away from all kinds of stress, they eat well and spend quality time with their family. Due to all these reasons, I believe that the old days are the best days to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... are happy, however few of them are not agree with them. In my opinion, yes, these da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, even so, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57248157248 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3640500846 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457002457002 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4950599469 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.44 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.28 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172500549393 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575153738558 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659194219424 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109099078126 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549337330195 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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