The is no gainsyaing that the high pace of changes is a cosipucous of the modern era. There are controversial debates whether this pace of change has adverse effects on people's feeling and they are less happy or saitisfied than past. From my perspective, The great majority of people are satistfied from the high pace of changes. Since, not only they experience new things but also they live healthier. In addtion, they know more about their enviroment. The nesuing paragraphs will elaborat my points of view.
First exquisite point to be menitioned is that peope experience new thing expecially in thechnology. There is no doubt that the technologic changes are taking place with a high speed and people observe new thing during their lifeapans while each profund change would be happend in few years, were happnd during centuries. Take the social networks as an example, due to technology progress, people are capable to communiat with their friends, family memebers, colleagues and etc via social networks. It is undeniable that technology changes provide more convinient and amazing life and people can enjoy these improvements. Therefore, according the high pace of techonoloy changes, people can enjoy more than ever.
Second point that comes to my mind is that people can live more and better. In better words, the high pace of progress in medicine bring a high standard for peopel. So, people enjoy a healthier life than past. Take the operation methods, patient are operated with advanced equipments and the rate of successful operations has increased extremly. However, people were operated in simple rooms and most of the poeple died or became disable in past. Who perefer to be cured by past medical methods? even not past centuries methods, just past decades methods.
Last but not least, thanks to science progress, we know many thing about the history, formation of many objects like planets, galaxies, our planet, animals, oceans and etc. There is no doubt that scientists discover new things in short time and we are amazed about these new things. For example, few days ago, scientist anouced that they have discovered a new plannet that have condition similar our earth. I was pondering over this discovry wether any live extistend there? Yesterday, scientist showed a picture from a new discovery galaxy. There is no debate that scientist discoveris during a week is more that centuries in far past centuries. Therefore, we can live in modern age with plentiful information about our sorounding and enjoy our knowledge and information.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned paragraphs, the high space of the changes have far-reaching impacts in people's lives and they can live more convenient and healthier than past.
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO33-Integrated 76
- TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex 73
- All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. 76
- TPO 52- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the past
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Suggestion: Even
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ore convenient and healthier than past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7009303498 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.485481135 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0769230769 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11538461538 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171588170203 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474273046526 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505650231347 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104876277865 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042825440181 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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