Nowadays, with an era of progress young people have much easier life than before, so they always think about the working hard to get more money to improve the quality of their life. in y opinion, young people should think about everything in their life, such as, make important decisions for future.
First, every decision they’ll make even the small one, has some influences to their future life, for example, when the people of middle east made decision to use a lot of water I means that they waste the last sources of water they had, and it’s done before they think about what happened to people later? What children should to without water? They’ve never think about these thinks.so they waste it.
Second, humans are hunting foxes to sells their skins, or they are hunting some kangaroos because bothering humans by eats all crops that they plant, or they are cutting down the trees to make papers and make beautiful sofas. And all these things destroyed almost of forest that animals live there but they have never think about it, it’s not important for them \they just think about a moment that they are living also they just want to be special such as wear a coat that made polar bearskin or in Africa some people kill elephants just for cut their tusk to made some jewelry, without any upset and they have never think about that cute bear that was alive or that elephant had a child or not, some months or some days ago.
Third, some young people some kind humans take care about animals and their natural life and plants to save them and growth them in the flagship places to get survival them. Also government think about it and makes some offices to absorbing more people to make an important decision about everything that will help people in future.
In summaries, most of the young people never think about important things, that for their children’s future. I hope so, young people beside of their busy luxury life they have, should think more about effective decisions that they will make them. But it is not to ourselves, it's effective to future that we must give glory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...y to improve the quality of their life. in y opinion, young people should think ab...
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Suggestion: mean
...t made decision to use a lot of water I means that they waste the last sources of wat...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... animals live there but they have never think about it, it's not important for t...
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Suggestion: thought
..., without any upset and they have never think about that cute bear that was alive or ...
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Suggestion: Also,
...e flagship places to get survival them. Also government think about it and makes som...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... about everything that will help people in future. In summaries, most of the young peo...
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... their children's future. I hope so,young people beside of their busy luxury life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, for example, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78746594005 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17611739954 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509536784741 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.094363081 48.9658058833 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894631397409 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048469543548 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034643396371 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722245770642 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030743316895 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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