There is no gainsyaing that young people are an integral part of society. There are many controvesial arguments about the young people Imapacts on societies. Some people believe that young people have no influence no vital decisions of society especially for future of society. On the other hand, some people hold opposite view. From my perspective, young people have a pivotal role in makind decision about the society future. The ensuing paragraphs will elaboerate my points of view.
First exquitise point to be menitoned is that young poeple consist of a main part of each society population and there is no saying that they can influence the whole socity. In better words, young people are great of importance in each society, since they are not only so much but also have time and energy. For example, in my country, there was a rule that women were not allowed to go to football stadiums for years. Last year, a girl was going to go inside stadium and the guards did not permit. She became angry and kill her self as a suicide. After that, The great majority of young people establish many champain and demonstration and, finally this rule was abducted. Maybe, it seems that this change has no important effect, but it was a revolutionary change for my traditional and religous country.
Second point that comes to my mind is that young people can participate elections and advocate their favorite candidate. There is no doubt that elections have a curcial role in most of the societies. Most of the candidates want to convince young people to vote to them. Everyone knows that young people's votes are important. For example, last year, there was a electioin for presidency and young people were leading opponent of one candidate and the great majority of adults advocate a religous and conservative candidate. Young people attempt hard and finally their favorite candidate wone and became president. During one year, he has made important decison for internation relationship and people's rights. Therefore, young people are capable to enfluenc their societies via elections.
Last but not least, some people believe that the most of the people who are making decision are old people, since they are working in government and parlimentary and they do not attach importance to young people. In my opinion, young people have far-reaching impact on these people as their children. In better words, young people coerce their parents and families to take care about the young people's concerns. Therefore, young people influence thier families, so they are numerous enough to enfluence the society.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, young pople have striking impacts on present and future decision of their societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tant. For example, last year, there was a electioin for presidency and young peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15144766147 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65913084117 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476614699332 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7337999608 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9615384615 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2692307692 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80769230769 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223970993789 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765702749165 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558216898707 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146690762255 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436913711825 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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