The teacher can give the assignment in many form like paper work, class presentation and group project in order to improve their student's talents and efficient in particular field. As when students are doing the work as a team or individual both of it has own merits and demerits. In order to explain which best, I want to explore some advantages and the disadvantages.
First of all, while students are doing work as team then they will be having following advantages. First, student are integrated on their work. For example, when it comes like, this our project we must do our level best, our team should go ahead that kind mental integration will develop among the students whereas individual work she/he may not have that team spirit which is very important for the success.
Secondly, sharing of knowledge between the groups. For example, someone very good in collecting the data, some smart in making analysis the data which is collected by their group. And, some of them may have extreme writing skill regarding presenting the paper. If, we put all talents together then we expect the amazing result to the team isn't? That is power of the team work.
Thirdly, may some time individual may not get the recognition for his /her own work when comes to the team work, rewards or punishments are go to all. It is kind of selfless act that's what teacher wants from a student not more than that. One individual cannot to all task by him/her self because it cost time and money which more precious to the today's world situations.
Finally, by doing the team work students not only learning the new things but also the they will have lots of fun while doing their particular task. For example, one team working regarding water plant management, they are not work that project but also for hotels, movies and golf while they have leisure time that is very fun unforgettable events. But, the individual worker do not have such kind of fun activities because their mind is in very narrow path.
So, I want conclude that in order to enjoy the benefits as above mentioned, one should work in group, not alone. Some times seems individual work has unique icon in society, but, when compare withe advantages of ream work then it is every mere.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'in particular', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275862068966 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.144827586207 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0551724137931 0.0866891130778 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.064367816092 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0551724137931 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110344827586 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0413793103448 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3769871055 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206896551724 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873563218391 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275862068966 0.0209618222197 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229885057471 0.0139019557991 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2273.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81329923274 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.271099744246 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212276214834 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135549872123 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0869565217391 0.112833075102 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3769871055 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.8741987602 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5789473684 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.531927878 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.631578947 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.8065688518 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.61739130435 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269125111409 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0886475813564 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0615130181956 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559335859528 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124028193697 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105644918322 0.114077575197 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440943899229 0.0781384742642 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.229713257362 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0289496167724 0.067059652881 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165567049936 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314640864724 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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